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Juggertha — The Punisher
Published: 2011-02-11 14:33:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1975; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 39
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A quick couple hour drawing of The Punisher.This is the first time that I've drawn him... and I'm kind of surprised by that. I like angry guys with guns, so I'm confused as to why I haven't shown him any love before.
Either way, this was done up for a quick street fight over on penciljack - [link]
Wish me luck.
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I really like the angle and the clean lines but this is a critique so I will get straight to what can be improved. From the chest up and from the waist down, it seems like they are from different bodies/angles. I think the belt could arch higher on the right side to help match the angle to the upper body. I think that fix can help the "teeth" in the Punisher logo too. Maybe, maybe not. It appears that it can be an easy fix. That's the only thing that really sticks out. Other minor things are: the extra knuckle on the pointer finer and the fingers leading down to the pinkie could be scaled slightly smaller. This last part is more of a style preference but I prefer less cheek bone accent and his hair is a bit Adolf Hitlerish.
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I applaud you for taking on such a difficult angle. I like the detail especially in the face. I think the gun would have benefited from reference. I'm no gun aficionado, but I can't tell what kind of firearm I'm looking at. It looks like a revolver, but I don't see the chamber. It should also appear larger (more extreme foreshortening) because it's closer to the viewer than everything else and extends beyond his hand.
For a pose like this I would have gone with making both legs straight to give more strength and balance to his pose.
On a side note, that pouch on his belt barely looks large enough to hold a cell phone, never mind extra clips or whatever he might store there. Don't forget about proportion. Compare the size of the pouch to something like, say, his foot, and determine how they relate to one another, size-wise.
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Yeah, thanks for the comments, man. I know that I really have to re-work that gun.
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Pretty cool over all. The eyes and the nose on the skull seem a bit high. Normally the eyes are a the bottom of his pecs and the nose is resting on his solar plexus area. The trigger finger looks odd...almost as though he's wearing a ring but I think that line was supposed to be indicating the bend of the finger?
It's a difficult angle you're attempting to pull off. I think the shoulders/chest/neck area seems kind of skewed. I'd like to see some perspective on the gun...the barrel circles alone aren't really conveying the bad ass in your face you want to convey here.
Nice job for a quick drawing though. I'm enjoying these exercises you're doing. Keep it up!
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Yeah, that first knuckle bend is buggin' the hell outta' menow. Gonna' have to fix that before the challenge.
I might also mess with those skull eyes. I looked through the references and see what you're talking about.
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cool, I'd also suggest tweaking Frank's nose and mouth if you have time. The nose seems a bit too long (height wise). I think if you made it a little shorter and moved the mouth up some it would even his face out a little.
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