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Published: 2013-05-10 00:20:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 6109; Favourites: 156; Downloads: 0
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Jack's waking up 'scene' from my sort of story, a kind of futuristic AU. (it needs a name i think, any ideas ?)Hmm well sorry for the long post but I dk how to put that 'read more' thingy and it's too late (2am give or give more) to search the internet right now (i sure its super simple and im a retard but well)...
I actually wanted to put more details, explain more, but it was getting too long so yep i didn't
And as you can probably imagine, yes, I really have tones of ideas, I'm going really too far with this ...
Any Impressions ?
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PLEASE CONTINUE THIS ITS SO GOOOOOOOOODLLAMA
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You tease! I want to read more now, no matter which format.
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Ooo, just got some ideas you can totally steal. (This might be a touch spacey/StarWarsish)
Jack, his parents and little sister live on a moon, where the poor are forced to live separate from the rich on the planet. But even then, Jacks family is separate from the initial community, causing slightly uproarish problems with locals. Mostly to do with being traitors (The Overland family appeared to live better than the rest of the community) or freaks (Jack was born with white hair and iceblu eyes, to a brunette and brown eyed mother and father).
Jack grows up, constantly ridiculed and humiliated by the locals. Even when his parents and sis try to comfort him, he becomes distant and "cold", spending lots of time by himself in the nearby forest and lake. One day, in an attempt to reconnect with Jack, Emma (sis) has the albinoish young man ice skate with her on his lake. She manages to get Jack to smile and laugh a bit, but its all lost when some judgmental hunters find them after following a strange incoming single that was being sent unknowingly to Jacks wrist communicator. They accuse him of being an informer for Pitch and attack. Jack is getting beat down and Emma tries pulling a guy off him. That man hits her and she goes flying. Jack is angry, and his abilities come out as he grabs the guys arm and it starts freezing over up to the shoulder. The frozen arm man and all the others pull back and run towards town. Jack and Emma hide in their house for awhile. Angry shouts arrive at their doorstep, demanding the freak son Jack. They break in, and force Jack outside, ignoring his sib and parents. They nearly beat him to death till his powers kick back in and he freezes his way to the forest lake. The buff bro of the frozen arm man manages to follow him and hit him in the face and toss him to the center of the lake, where the man assumes Jack will break through and drown, and doesn't stay to make sure. Jack wakes up sometime later, bleeding, with no memories and a distorted message with not much to offer.
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I real like this and I would love to see moreΒ
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please tell me you continued this!!!!! I really would love to see your interpretation of RoTG with your AU!!!! XXXDDD
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Continue that storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
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Blood?
You have to continue this Comic!!!!!!!!
Please!!!!!!!!!
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Hartyharhar. League of Legends.
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I like where this is going.I would help with the name if you don't have one.
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Sorry, I can't read this without that annoying woman voice telling "You have one unread message", but....this is amazing!!! ;3;
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That's sort of what came to my mind when I read it
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The Frost Legacy? The Frost Identity? Or, The Frost Ultimatum?
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HAha Frost Legacy, that one sounds so awesome ! 
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I was heading more towards the Bourne Legacy way, but that works as well
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WHEN FIC FOR YOUR AU GOING TO BE WRITTEN SLASH DRAWN!!! ME WANTS TO KNNNOOOOOOOOWW!!!!!
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Seems like an interesting story. I'd like to see how it develops and what is actually going on.
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Ok, I think I'm officially in love with this idea! 
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Sort of, I hope. Right now I am preparing something, but it will take a while, and it's not really a comic, it's different 
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I love this AU Idea, I feel it's truly original!
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No problem! And yes this AU seems like it needs a name, maybe something sci-fi, I don't know, I have some ideas but they all sound pretty lame. It's your story though, I would love to read it!
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Well, still share, mines are pretty lame too !
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Sure!Well, I don't know if you want to keep it in the comments but I can shout out some ideas if you want! Hmm,how about "Fear Dawns".... wow ok, scratch that, that sounds weird, was sort of thinking of playing on the whole fearling invasion bit
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Non non that's good, I think I'm gonna keep this thing about fear invasion, that talks to me !
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Oh cool!Well any other ideas or any other themes for the name?
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WELL, I was going to say "nope", but then something came to me : "Subject Number Five" or something along tose lines, but nobody can really understand for now, because I still haven't explained the rest of my story ! >< But I'll do it soon, pretty soon ...
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I like that! Now you are getting somewhere!
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Alright ! I need to get this show on the road !
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oh, you actually started it already! im impressed XDDDDD
you drew a cool sequential panel and hmm, i like the blood there. so excited for the next one
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Un dΓ©tail, les bras de Jack sur le premier dessin (plan Γ©loignΓ©) seraient pas un tout p'tit peu trop longs ? o3o
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Ouais ! Enfaite il est supposé avoir les jambes à moitié plié ou je ne sais quoi mais c'est raté, j'ai douillé à faire cette case parce que je dessinais en tout petit et elle m'a très agacé donc je l'ai laissé tel quel.
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Aaaah j'comprends mieux ! Oki doki loki :'3
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Moi j'adore, de toute faΓ§on je trouve ton style trΓ¨s joli et puis j'aime beaucoup l'idΓ©e de base, l'UA est trΓ¨s intΓ©ressante ^w^ β₯
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This is awesome, I would love to see some more
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