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JuliaTheSpaceLady — Stand Alone Revan's relationships
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Published: 2016-09-25 01:22:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1052; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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I'm currently working on the 3rd chapter of Stand Alone, But I haven't finished it just yet I'll need more time to come up with more stuff but before that I wouldlike to tell you a few things about the protagonist of the story and her relationship with the bad batch. As you may know Revan is a woman with no emotions.
She's a blank slate. At the beginning of the story she doesn't know how to talk to people at all or how to forge relationships. Until she met the Bad Batch.
I'll list the two relationships of the three characters above.
Hunter:
As you may know by now I ship Hunter and Revan together, I found this an interesting shipping because on how it started.
When Hunter first meets Revan he doesn't understand her right away. But he becomes very curious in her and watches her.
He's at this point broken, he's half the man he used to be during the clone wars. there's this story I'm thinking of doing explaining that. but that's in the far future.
over the course of vol. 1 he becomes more and more interested in her. On Revan's part she's surprised that he would spend time trying to talk to her.
She starts to feel comfortable around him.
Crosshair
Crosshair has a small crush on Revan, It doesn't go anywhere but he likes her because in a way she's a lot like him.
Cold, tough, and quiet. But he doesn't show his feelings to her at all in fact sometimes he acts down right rude to her.
And no he never tries to get with her at all.
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And that's about it for now!
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Comments: 15
I love the character's eyes in this. and you did pretty good on the hair as well. The shading is great as well. This may sound weird but you can draw really good noses. (and you can draw guys a lot better than me)
Of course there are a couple of problems in the art that need fixing. first of all, The shape of the girl's face is unrealistic, she either has the highest cheek bones in the world, or none at all I myself fell into this trap in in my early stages of drawing. I suggest looking up face proportions (and proportions in general). My second problem is with the man on the left. Is it just me, or is his left arm blending into his right arm? Don't get me wrong, arms are extremely difficult and crossed arms are one of the most difficult positions of all. Next time you draw, try much simpler positions for the arms and once that is mastered, take it to the next step. Finally, the third man. I understand that foreshortening is hard but I am so confused by his pose. It looks like he's turned his back to the "camera" from the neck down but then His head has turned a direct 90-95 degree angle compared to the rest of the body. (His eye is creeping me out too). next time, choose to draw him at a side profile or with his entire back to the "camera".
I know this critique was rather harsh. (I tried to make it as nice as possible) I want you to improve on your art work as much as possible and I hope this helps. (please don't hate on me ) I still think this is really good!
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Wow, this picture and story are really good! I love Revan alot!
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Nice artwork. I like the mood and atmosphere on this. Maybe you could add a source of light somewhere to add a bit of depth, shadows and highlights. Alos those description are great. They add a context so everything makes sense. Keep up the good work!
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The back story seems nice and I like how you conveyed her presence. She does seem like the silent type indeed. Yet she seems like she will be a interesting character later on!
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Yes she will be very interesting.
And she might come out of that shy and silent state just a little bit....
Maybe...
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Overall, this is good! It creates a nice, dark mood that I can see you're trying to convey! If you work a little bit more on shading, keeping in mind where the light is coming from, I think you can really improve your artwork! Good luck with your story as well!
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Thanks for the critique!
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No problem! Keep up the good work!
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I like it, her relationship with Hunter is interesting, but I find her relationship with Crosshair cute, like he's a big brother to her.
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Thanks! I like that idea about Crosshair being a big brother to Revan that's good!
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Ya, I like to think that he is a big brother to the Bad Batch crew.
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It's possible he is the most mature in the group. seconded to Hunter.
That's why Crosshair is one of my faves!
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