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6:33pm:i deleted you from my
phone. so goodbye.
[i wont miss you]
7:00pm:
no reply. because my
silence speaks more than
words ever could.
[even though you never
thought so]
1:02am:
remember that time we
were tangled and drowning
so far in our own
thoughts and love?
[i cried]
2:15am:
no reply. because i
know you remember.
[but you're not smiling
anymore]
4:20am:
i left something outside
your door.
[its your heart in
the shape of a book]
4:22am:
no reply. i ran outside
in shorts and socks
to grab it before
it froze.
[at least you took care of it]
5:30am:
no reply. you always thought
i looked beautiful.
[but it doesnt matter]
6:33am:
no reply. i have a
new number.
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Comments: 91
this is amazing!
how it is true and sensitive!
uuuh. I feel my sadnesses in it.
great!
I think Iยดll read your others poems soon.
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i hate nights like this, up all nite, crazy thoughts while they snore and dream of nothing. i really enjoy your writing <3
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This was a good one! Don't stop, keep them comming 
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if only it didn't have to end like that...
Beautiful.
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You are an amazing writer.
Please keep going with it.
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thank you so much
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So beautiful and real...thankfully I've never been there *b/c I've never had a signif other* but that's okay.
Wonderful work. You're so insanely talented.
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thank you so much 
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You're welcome.
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yes it is. i know exactly what you mean.
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Wow..it's kinda creepy because I did almost the exact same thing when the love of my life just up and left me.The only differance is it happend over myspace.Funny how shit works.....
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yeah i know, i was surprised at how many people could relate to this.
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ooooooooooow ..
what is this .. i can't believe it ..
wonderful words and very reality
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An astounding poem, it's incredible how perfectly it captures the emotion of the moment behind it thanks to saying so little... So well, in fact, that every stanza has an impact of a sledgehammer 
... as incredible as the poem is, however, it has the best artist's comment I've ever seen o,O The single dry, informative sentence below the work brings a whole new meaning to "silence speaking more than words ever could"
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oh wow, thank you so much. you dont know how much that means to me
thank you!
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i love the melancholy portrayed in this piece
and the short fragmented paragraphs are like a weak pulsation that is struggling to stay alive but unfortunately stops at the end.
BOTTOM LINE THIS IS AMAZING
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This is beautiful and sad. I love the way it's set up and how well written it is. I think a lot of people may be able to relate in one way or another. I know I can. 
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thank you
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In a way, yes.
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ohmygod, have you been stalking me? i can relate. heeh.
lovely, it's beautiful
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aww, sorry to hear, but thank you. and hopefully i could have put some of those things you were feeling into words.
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it's okay, thank you. i guess all you gotta do is move on and get over it right? :/ behh.
and oh definitely. as i was reading i was like 
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hehe
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woOw no comment coz it's woow amazing woOw and +fav
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thank you so much
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4:20am:
i left something outside
your door.
[its your heart in
the shape of a book]
wonderful
xo!
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thank you. i think thats the stanza that hits me the most and meant the most to me when i wrote it.
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it takes the actual experience to be able to write well about this... and write well you did.
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I... can relate.
It's a very lovely piece, grim in itself, but necessary.
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thank you. and sorry to hear that you can relate to it.
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Oooh, no need to be sorry! If anything you should be proud that your piece is identifiable.
And you know the saying. You live, you learn. ^_^
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