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JuliusScipio — Equestria Vanishing Chapter 2

Published: 2012-01-21 09:41:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1473; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 16
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Description News: I've given up on EqD with this particular tale, so expect FAST updating to begin. Vola, fabula!


Sorry if the beginning is slow. The real heart of this story is elsewhere, and I think that when it's revealed, it may or may not blow your mind. Lots to take in...

Also- Fallout 3. At 3. In the mornin'. That is all.
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Comments: 4

AwSweetHolyHell [2012-01-21 11:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh Celestia, why are you so inconsiderate when you send out letters? Mine has the exact same thing going on XD
Nice ominous warning right there, nightmares, a thing everyone can relate to and still something vague enough to give you room to bring something really surprising to the table, I like it.

Then there's the turnabout with Scoot, very nice build-up. If any fan of her's reads this, they'll be dejected before being brought back in with a whoop. You crafty devil, you

And nice way to end the chapter, with a little touch of hope, that will probably prove to be wrong (imo that's how it's gonna go ) but you never know.

Overall, it was slightly less good than chapter one, methinks, but it's good nonetheless.

Also fallout is baws! I love that universe. x)

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JuliusScipio In reply to AwSweetHolyHell [2012-01-22 00:12:23 +0000 UTC]

I agree on Fallout and the slight fall in quality. Honestly, this was the part that screwed me up the most. The next segment will be MUCH easier. It's something I'm more comfortable with as far as fictionwise.

(Wait- your letter? I'm intrigued now. Whatcha mean?)

I thought Night-Mares and it was over. It fit two criteria: first, it was horse-pun related, and second, real nightmares are scary and...you'll see. We hate them, and often they confuse the crap outta us. Or at least, me.

I like Scootaloo! I couldn't do anything bad to her ever! Hahaha. The funny thing is, Twilight's my favorite and I'm going to be mean to her...


Hope is good! Hope is what I write. But... hopes are often dashed. Take what you will~

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AwSweetHolyHell In reply to JuliusScipio [2012-01-22 00:55:34 +0000 UTC]

Eager to see the next part, I am. I'll be taking your word on it, you better deliver ya hear!

The letter I mentioned is the one that appears in my fic. Basicly, there's some unexplainable health-hazard that hits the mane-six and Twi sends a letter to Celestia.
Who answers in a short, telegraph-like message full of urgency.
After I re-read my own stuff before posting, I felt like "Damn, for a benevolent sort of absolute monarch, she sure is inconsiderate" xD

Nice touch on that nightmare pun, though you should probably make it a lil' more obvious, just to get a giggle out of the reader

And yeah, I'm right then, Celestia doesn't know jack all xD

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JuliusScipio In reply to AwSweetHolyHell [2012-01-23 15:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^ I really do hope so.

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