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Published: 2005-04-25 15:02:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 3628; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 278
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Description Im not really happy with the accessoirs the text and the tv stripes so if you have any idea for improving tell me.
Comments and cretique is here even more welcome than usuall.

The fullview contains more detail as usuall
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Comments: 63

jumomo In reply to ??? [2006-10-31 06:08:32 +0000 UTC]

No thanks

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blue-letter [2006-10-02 22:30:18 +0000 UTC]

i think it looks cool

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Opticaliber [2006-09-28 02:55:06 +0000 UTC]

If I were editing this...I would add some depth! Use perspective (prob 1 point). Throw a vanishing point in there and have the text conform to this as if they were walls of a cavern. I'de put the vanishing point wherever you want attention drawn, as the eye will naturally gravitate towards this point. I would also throw the text behind the blue-ish figure.

Sorry if this has already been suggested, as I didn't read all the posts...

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jumomo In reply to Opticaliber [2006-09-28 16:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I didn not understand most of what you said o.o

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Opticaliber In reply to jumomo [2006-09-28 20:20:53 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, Let me try to rephrase.
What I was trying to say is: make it look more three dimensional.

For instance, have the lower text even taller on the lefthand side. Have the right hand side of the same text box even shorter. Then adjust the overall horizontal size to much smaller. You already do this, I'm just saying make it more dramatic.

Check out this photo:
[link]
Imagine your text is written on the buildings walls.

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jumomo In reply to Opticaliber [2006-09-28 20:29:34 +0000 UTC]

Im not sure if it was intentioned to make it look like the text adds to the perspective.
I dont think it would be looking better. Plus even If I wanted to follow your instructions I dont have access to the .ufo editable files now. My bad ^^

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Opticaliber In reply to jumomo [2006-09-29 03:10:56 +0000 UTC]

Don't get me wrong, it looks great the way it is. I didn't mean to come off rude, but you did ask for critique.

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jumomo In reply to Opticaliber [2006-09-29 10:50:27 +0000 UTC]

Dont worry ... I dont take it bad. I just didnt understand your advice well enough.

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bleebt [2006-09-06 02:53:08 +0000 UTC]

very cool. thanks for visiting my page too

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SiathLinux [2006-08-30 21:23:32 +0000 UTC]

To the question of getting rid of 'tv lines' Extremely High resolution render - scale down to 'normal' size (for example render in 4000x3000 and then resize the rendered image to 1600x1200 or 1024x768)... the resize will 'smooth' a lot of issues when scaling down.

I really like the overall 'look and feel of this one.

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jumomo In reply to SiathLinux [2006-08-30 21:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Tv lines has been aded in postwork by intention.
Good you like it

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SiathLinux In reply to jumomo [2006-08-30 23:41:49 +0000 UTC]

agh ok...

Your Welcome.

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jumomo In reply to SiathLinux [2006-08-31 03:06:36 +0000 UTC]

I didnt even knew they come by accident ... never experienced it .. but i usually dont render at small resolutions ... so perhaps thats why.
Does it look bad like this?

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SiathLinux In reply to jumomo [2006-08-31 23:00:57 +0000 UTC]

NO, it looks great, I thought your comment was that you couldn't work out how to get them to go away.... It's an excellent image.

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jumomo In reply to SiathLinux [2006-09-01 12:53:06 +0000 UTC]

I see thank you then ^^

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SiathLinux In reply to jumomo [2006-09-01 23:03:07 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome.

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darrendiewo [2006-08-06 10:03:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm quite fond of the texture.

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jumomo In reply to darrendiewo [2006-08-06 10:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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rammstein-freak [2006-06-22 03:41:40 +0000 UTC]

I like it!!!! Purple is my fav color and it caught my eye!!

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jumomo In reply to rammstein-freak [2006-06-24 21:56:22 +0000 UTC]

If you see this purple I would recommend checking the color temperature of your monitor.
It is rather a nice blue.

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rammstein-freak In reply to jumomo [2006-06-25 00:52:06 +0000 UTC]

Ooops sorry about that...I have been real sick with a 104 temp.... and just recooperating from almost pnemonia anyway, I also like the color blue!

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jumomo In reply to rammstein-freak [2006-06-25 06:45:36 +0000 UTC]

How much is 104 in celsius?

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rammstein-freak In reply to jumomo [2006-06-28 22:34:25 +0000 UTC]

40 celsius....I think

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jumomo In reply to rammstein-freak [2006-06-28 23:21:33 +0000 UTC]

Ah ok

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Random4Now [2006-01-26 23:46:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That's cool!

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shockspark1985 [2005-05-23 05:52:17 +0000 UTC]

i really like this. love the sharded textures, beautiful use of the color purple, good stuff. i'd use it.

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jumomo In reply to shockspark1985 [2005-05-23 12:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like

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r3d-6ar0n [2005-04-27 00:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Oi! Replace the text with code, C, pert, whatever O.o

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jumomo In reply to r3d-6ar0n [2005-04-27 00:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Why?

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Skinty [2005-04-26 02:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thats really cool. The render is very good, but im not too crazy about the 2d, maybe take the text away and add a few shapes or whatnot. But otherwise goodjob man.

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jumomo In reply to Skinty [2005-04-26 02:29:52 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean with shapes?

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Skinty In reply to jumomo [2005-04-26 03:22:54 +0000 UTC]

For example - [link]

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jumomo In reply to Skinty [2005-04-26 03:36:48 +0000 UTC]

I dont get it o_O

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Skinty In reply to jumomo [2005-04-26 03:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Ok, hehe... its 5:50am here atm, so maybe thats why im not making any sense

Log onto MSN

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jumomo In reply to Skinty [2005-04-26 03:56:14 +0000 UTC]

So we are bot at gtm +1 ? ^^

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Skinty In reply to jumomo [2005-04-26 03:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Like... circles, grids, stars, anything really.. just to give it an extra effect

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jumomo In reply to Skinty [2005-04-26 03:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Thats not so easy I wanted to do but i couldnt think of some nice things ...

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Skinty In reply to jumomo [2005-04-26 03:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Heh, just like random 2d shapes

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jumomo In reply to Skinty [2005-04-26 03:37:33 +0000 UTC]

How to do?

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isis-amataeru [2005-04-26 02:09:10 +0000 UTC]

that's so awesome... yay finally new wallpapers~!
I really love the perspective of the projectile object, and all the radical designs that increase its dimensional surface. The text is really appealing and gives you a feeling like you are in a computer...which is really awesome! XD I like the shading and the colors fading to white towards the top than the bottom of the surface. Adds to texture and depth in appearance.
A dazzling piece like always! Great job!

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jumomo In reply to isis-amataeru [2005-04-26 02:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Im very glad you like it
You really always give so good cretique

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isis-amataeru In reply to jumomo [2005-04-27 01:57:24 +0000 UTC]

No problem! XD

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r3d-6ar0n [2005-04-26 01:38:18 +0000 UTC]

this is my wallpaper now!

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jumomo In reply to r3d-6ar0n [2005-04-26 02:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for using

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OGProductions [2005-04-25 20:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, for one, that.... thing... it's COOL whatever it is... , that's fine. I say leave it. But, yes, I would do away with the words. Then, i think it'll look good.

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jumomo In reply to OGProductions [2005-04-25 20:59:21 +0000 UTC]

So you say text removal?

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OGProductions In reply to jumomo [2005-04-26 19:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes.

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Tinnu [2005-04-25 18:43:30 +0000 UTC]

finds cool, sieht sehr spacig aus, wie'n raumschiff...kann aber den text net so lesen, was stehtn da ? hab bock auf heidelbeer-kuchen *_* ... tooo~ll ~^.^~

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jumomo In reply to Tinnu [2005-04-25 20:32:44 +0000 UTC]

He hΓΌ? Heidelboris-kuchen? Also doch "Armine" Rotenburg hatte seinen Einfluss XD
Eh spacig ? Ich denke mal ... das hΓΆrt sich mehr positiv an als negativ ^^ Also danke
Der Text ist eigentlich nur eine definition von phasenverschiebung ... soll ich dir link geben ? muahahaha XD

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Tinnu In reply to jumomo [2005-04-27 17:23:28 +0000 UTC]

phasenverschiebung? klingt nach bildung, nee danke, davon hab ich mittlerweile mal genug *schule in mΓΌlleimer werf*

klar ist spacig positiv gemeint, du nase! TSE XD

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