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Published: 2005-06-17 02:17:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1411; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 205
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For once, I actually like the way a picture turned out
'Tis Jaylily! Corny BG, yes, but I put EFFORT into it, doggonit!
I tried a new brush for shading- and I LURVE EEEETTT
GAAH I FORGOT THE THING ON HER THIGH AGAIN.D: Maybe I'll just keep it this way>_> I think it looks better without itX3
Reference used for the sketch^^
Unis © Neopets
Jaylily and art © Me
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Comments: 58
This is one of the most beautiful horse/uni pictures I've ever seen! Very nice.
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Very minor thingies: The front left leg looks a bit like its bent at the wrong place at the top, and the eyes are a bit too big for the head, but other than that... 
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I love the way this one turned out♥ 'Nuff said
Yepyep, the legs are weird, and I tried to fix the eyes and kinda couldn't>> I might try to fix them one of these days... *prods*
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Well, i hate to not say anything, and i hate to give a comment, without a Critique, when you asked for one, but, The hair is amazing, and i love the bg/uni magic, or whatever you wanna call it, lol. Anyways, its amazing, i dont see how you could do better, at all. The expression is wonderful, too.
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Very pretty. I love that her fur isn't white-white but kin of tinted
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I know I am the wrong person to say this, and I am not better myself (I suck) but... You encouraged advanced critique, and I just HAVE to say this.
She looks very thin, and the upper part on the front leg(s) is a bit... wrong. her chest is a little bit off, too.
Otherwise, AWESOME.
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Yep, I look at this a few days after drawing it and I can easily see that she's much too thin. Hehe, anorexic Uni?XD;;
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Lol XD Yeah
WHY do I think "lol" sounds so n00bish whilst I can't think of something better to say? o.o;
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nice pic 
maybe i should send you some horse anatomy links
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Thanks for the links! I'll have to take a decent look at them sometime when I have a little more free time- right now I'm scrambling to catch up with all these messages
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This is soooooo gorgeous!! She's absolutely beautiful!!
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I don't know why, but the fur.. things.. around the feet = love for me. Again, don't know why. Beautiful shades of red and green you used, they really add alot to the picture. Nice job on the muscles of the legs, horses and such are hard to do for me simply because of their muscles.. The only thing I can think of that could look better is the chest. It looks a bit too small, out of porportion with the legs/neck/head. ^^ Lovely.
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I love those too
Hmm, I think you're right!
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Wow thats so cool.
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absolutely gorgeous! the detail and swirls of light are so pwurty and effective!!!
My only crit would be the top muscles for the front leg closest to the viewer, It seems to be jutting out too far foreward without going back far enough but I know nothing about horse anatomy so don't listen to me
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Thank you!
hehe, I don't know anything about horse anatomy either. You're probably rightX3
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meh, I wouldn't go on my ideas, look at some anatomy diagrams or something
Its a brilliant picture all the same though, she's beautiful!!!
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Corny backround? Whats wrong with you girl?!?!?! Its effin beautiful!
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But it's so cliche!D: Field of stars and glowy bridge.. ppftt. I shoulda been able to think of SOMETHING less overdone>>
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Pwettyful mane!! SHINYS ON IT OwO. Good job on the wings and horn too! The only thing is, her eye is too big xD.
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Yep, I tried several times to make her eye work and it kept being too large><;; I might try to fix it
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Well, good luck on it!! n_n.
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i love everything except for the eyes, they just seem too big for the head...and in my oppinion the wings are set back slightly too far.
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I was waiting for someone to crit the eyesX3 I tried several times to make them look right.. but it didn't workD: I might end up going back and trying to re-do them again.
You're probably right about the wings, too. I could try to fix them=3
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resize gurl! select tool, resize select XD
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Starlite! Aww, you made me think about Starlite and Rainbow Brite again.. 
Still loving your style
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So prettiful! I love the wings! *steals jaylily* MWAHAHAHAHA. *cough*
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Ahhhhh.. that is GORGEOUS *0* 
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My lineart would be crisp because I used a soft hard brush.o-o Um... it's the paintbrush setting on hard brush? If that makes sense?
I worked very hard on those wings^^ I like how they turned out
Hmm, I really ought to time myself one of these days... maybe today!
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That's awesome! And not a corny bg! XDD;;
Okay, it says 'Advanced Critique Encouraged', so here it goes..
Her neck could be thicker. Not drastically, but ye know what I mean.. I think. She could be a little fatter too - horses are no skinny animal. XDD And that's about all. Feel free teh shool me XD
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Yeah, I think my main problems were that her eye is too big, her wings are too far back, she's much too skinny and possibly her head is too large.
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Wow, Becky! 
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wow that's really weird someone on the subeta oekaki drew a hikei (horsey like pet) in the same exact pose.. guess you guys used the same ref
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I really doubt that
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perhaps you guys have teh same textbook?
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by polly_pony_lauren on subeta
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Well, the hoof wasn't raised in the original pic>_> So hah.
This is just one of those generic poses, I guess...
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O_O How did you do the swirly pretty starry background?! @3@
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