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JUSTaRANDOMzombie — Menma ch.5 pg.4

Published: 2013-10-07 21:33:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1318; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description Naruto has become the 7th hokage and was happy with Hinata, but something/someone caused him to destroy konoha killing many villagers. He ran away leaving Hinata and his 1 year old son, Menma, alone. 11 years have passed and Menma wants to know about his father and why the villagers call him "The Traitor's Son"

Hinata must now tell Menma the truth about what happened to Naruto.
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izanarukami818 [2013-10-25 01:10:50 +0000 UTC]

OK these new guys are Morons 

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TomNamikaze [2013-10-14 22:04:25 +0000 UTC]

well, this is unrealistic. At least have Gaara be the Kazekage and forming an alliance with the Leaf. It would be 3vs2, but I think the next events could be pulled off.

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JUSTaRANDOMzombie In reply to TomNamikaze [2013-10-15 16:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know. I wanted Gaara to be overthrown or something happened to him that made him give up his position. I'll work on that. There are a lot of holes in the story I have to work on.  Thanks for the feedback  

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TomNamikaze In reply to JUSTaRANDOMzombie [2013-10-15 23:50:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. The story looks interesting but this thing just activated my OCD mode (and I'm a Gaara fan).

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