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justcallmemike — Ripped Apart (c) - Unwanted Affection
Published: 2014-01-31 09:59:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 802; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 12
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Graphite on Smooth paper
From the series "Pain Within" (c)
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awesome,is it ok if I share this on my facebook and show my friends?
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of course you can. and if you can tag me Facebook page ill be more than happy 
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Ok,thx! and yeah,of course I can tag you
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I like the feeling and the movement I get from this piece. It's simple in it's construction and yet is vibrant in its passion. The positioning of the head titling back looks a little off, unless that is artistic license, then ignore me. The gradation could be a hint softer. And don't be afraid to go darker for an even more dynamic look. Otherwise, this is a lovely piece and I hope I helped at least a little.
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you are absolutely right for the gradation. For contrast, my mistake was that I only used graphite, i should have used other mediums for a darker contrast.
But i did not understand the part related to the positioning of the head, would really appreciate it if you can please explain more.
And thank you so much Luna, it is always a pleasure to hear a constructive criticism
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Always welcome!
The positioning of the head tilting back looked a little off-balanced. But then I have poor depth perception, so that could be my eyes fooling around. Looking at it again, I see it's the white surrounding the caressing hand that made me think it was. My goof.
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*and am off to see your works 
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