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JustinPosada — REDMARSHAL: Introduction

Published: 2010-11-13 11:36:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2663; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 10
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Description When I was born, I killed my mother.  I killed my father.  My nurses.  Clergymen offering their blessings of protection.  And everyone else in attendance.  I was born a Redmarshal; a title that entails a curse of a life and the death of many.
I was swooped up by the Sect moments after I drew my first breath; swooped up and put to the brand.  Burned and marked like cattle.  A necessary sufferance to have the curse of the Redmarshal quelled.  We all go through this when we're discovered.  It's called the First Burning Day, and the brand that adorns us is known as the Soterus.  Without it, our curse runs rampant and all magic goes wild in our midst.  So much so that passersby become tangled messes of bone and blood, trees wither and splinter, and grass burns to ash.
Growing up in the Sect, you begin to fear your subsequent Burning Days.  For children, being burned with fiery iron can be as terrifying as death.  Our brands never last an entire lifetime.  The taint boiling beneath our flesh slowly rears its head, bypassing any brand over time.  Some Redmarshals go a decade before needing a new one.  Some go two days.  It's subjective, and keeps us in waiting; just one more thing for us to worry about.  It becomes a lifestyle that you build your world around.  
In no time at all, often after no more than a decade of preparation, a Redmarshal is utilized by the military and appointed to a small squadron of their fellows, comprised of no more than five and no less than three.  These squads are the ghosts of the military, dealing with what a normal soldier could not so much as hope to survive: Magi.  There are three illegal magics practiced throughout the world: Necromancy, the raising of the dead.  Ambromancy, prolonging one's life through the death of others.  And Blackchurn, conjuring the essence of disease and binding people in hexes.  In the Sect, we call them the Three Sisters, and dealing with any practitioners is our duty.  
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Comments: 7

RyCAS [2011-04-24 19:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Love how you keep your thumbnails alongside your art. Fav'ed

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RyCAS In reply to RyCAS [2011-04-24 19:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol @ me

Pretty good story though. Looking forward to more.

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barking-at-cars [2011-03-08 05:10:19 +0000 UTC]

I saw the character commission from Kasai and I fell in love with the two characters instantly. I love the depth of it all and I absolutely cannot wait to read more!

Above all else, this inspires me to continue with my own prose plans. Thank you!

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BlackGodFish [2010-12-21 03:19:25 +0000 UTC]

Gotta say: I frickin love this character and this story concept. I stumbled across your commission of Auer from Kasai and I was glad I did- I think you got something really neat going on here.
I'm a much better writer than an artist so I feel your pain with not being able to paint what I see in my mind but commissions are a great way to get around it (and DA has a ton of talented people.)
Prose doesn't get much love on DA so I will gladly watch you and peruse through your gallery when I have a little more time!
Cheers!

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orangeOC-oset [2010-12-03 05:49:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This looks really interesting! I will definitely be coming back to see more. It can't wait to see how this story unfolds.

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internetDM [2010-11-19 14:44:40 +0000 UTC]

I love it, this story will definitely keep me coming back time after time. You know i would love to see illustrations throughout the story's progression. I believe this will add a sense of depth to the story, and get some people that may be less likely to read it, into it.

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JustinPosada In reply to internetDM [2010-11-19 15:08:42 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree with you. Although, I myself, am not too great of a drawer, I'd love to commission more pieces of characters and scenes for it as times goes by. Also, thanks for the devotion to the plot thus far

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