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Published: 2011-03-21 21:56:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Wow... I'm not sure of it all but I know what's done is done… Let the stress seep in as the feeling of safety and comfort leak out. I need to sleep and let the night take me away... Take me to a far off land where things are simple and beautiful. I want to live there. I want to be there. I want that. Simplicity. Beauty. That's what I want in my world. In my life... So let the night take me away.

Hush child, take off your disguise and show everyone the person behind the mask. Where is that beautiful girl I once knew? The one that knew and believed she was beautiful no matter what? Who had the audacity to make you believe otherwise? I don't know who you are anymore and I don't believe you do either.

My hair is up, taking off the make up, looking in the mirror wondering what I am ashamed of. Is there a reason I paint a happy face on an unhappy and pathetic girl? Am I more ashamed of what I look like under this veil or that I am afraid to be who I am?

She sits, alone, in her white veil and gown. Living a lie. She grew up scared and lonely. She was beautiful but was terrified by her own reflection. She wipes away the tears and walks down the isle. In her hands, the flowers she didn't want, on her hand the ring that bound her to eternal hell. Her name, changed. Her identity lost. She looks into the blue-green eyes that masked him. His blonde hair covered the horns. She says her vows on command and digs her grave.

I miss the touch of your hand and the rhythm of your heart echoing in my ears. The way I was no longer scared of anything and that my worries were all crushed in those few moments. I miss the sound of your voice and the way our hands perfectly fit together. I miss your perfect smile and the way you grinned every time I looked at you. I miss your big brown eyes that seemed to gleam every time you looked at me. I miss you. I miss that feeling. I miss the perfection of those few moments.
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Comments: 6

SirV3rt1go [2011-03-21 23:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Sad but powerful. It doesn't have to be a long novel by any means, it's still just as moving. Great job.

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KaeJen96 In reply to SirV3rt1go [2011-03-22 00:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you(: It means a lot.

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SirV3rt1go In reply to KaeJen96 [2011-03-22 00:33:34 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, don't even mention it!

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tamikotheoriginal [2011-03-21 22:19:13 +0000 UTC]

oh my god. beautiful. that is also how i write. always deep and short....

the darkness slowly crept towards the young gil cowering in the corner. fear in her innocent eyes. she dose not know the horrors of this world yet, but soon now she will be forever tainted and marked by the evils of sin. if only if only she could fight it off. if only she could run away again. not this time. not again. the darkness, inches from her pail form and creeping closer.
a man, with strong hands and a kind face stomps in and turns on the small light switch. the girl runs up and hides herself within her fathers arms. she is safe from the darkness, if only for now. ....

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KaeJen96 In reply to tamikotheoriginal [2011-03-21 22:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. I really like that...I have a really short attention span and a very small vocabulary so these little bursts are uncommon for me. and thanks(:

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tamikotheoriginal In reply to KaeJen96 [2011-03-21 22:56:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks. your welcome. i am the same way. XD i can never write a long story its always like a paragraph.

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