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SirV3rt1go [2011-03-21 23:49:20 +0000 UTC]
Sad but powerful. It doesn't have to be a long novel by any means, it's still just as moving. Great job.
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KaeJen96 In reply to SirV3rt1go [2011-03-22 00:16:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you(: It means a lot.
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SirV3rt1go In reply to KaeJen96 [2011-03-22 00:33:34 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome, don't even mention it!
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tamikotheoriginal [2011-03-21 22:19:13 +0000 UTC]
oh my god. beautiful. that is also how i write. always deep and short....
the darkness slowly crept towards the young gil cowering in the corner. fear in her innocent eyes. she dose not know the horrors of this world yet, but soon now she will be forever tainted and marked by the evils of sin. if only if only she could fight it off. if only she could run away again. not this time. not again. the darkness, inches from her pail form and creeping closer.
a man, with strong hands and a kind face stomps in and turns on the small light switch. the girl runs up and hides herself within her fathers arms. she is safe from the darkness, if only for now. ....
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KaeJen96 In reply to tamikotheoriginal [2011-03-21 22:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow.. I really like that...I have a really short attention span and a very small vocabulary so these little bursts are uncommon for me. and thanks(:
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tamikotheoriginal In reply to KaeJen96 [2011-03-21 22:56:51 +0000 UTC]
thanks. your welcome. i am the same way. XD i can never write a long story its always like a paragraph.
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