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Published: 2010-11-28 05:28:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Opal harvest moons
Nestled sweetly inside your iris
Reflect my wide-open spaces.
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Comments: 1

Zukaanger777 [2010-12-02 23:50:13 +0000 UTC]

It's a nice haiku,
calm and soothing, with hidden
undertones of black.

(i was going to say negative undertones, but i decided to make my critique in the form of a haiku as well. XD)

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