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Published: 2010-09-15 05:37:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Shards of ancient chariot,
Repressed in coliseums of ago;
Apollo's beams, torn and grey,
Like yesterday's newspaper.
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somnomollior [2010-09-28 13:01:44 +0000 UTC]

I like the imagery a lot, and the comparison of ancient glories of the past with a newspaper works well. I am not sure what you mean in the second line, and I think that 'of ago' is unnecessary.

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