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kaitoupirate — 9 Creature - Cheetah Beast

Published: 2009-08-31 00:14:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 3726; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 0
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Description Or, uh... some kind of cat beast. But I couldn't put that, I'd get sued. I wasn't paying attention to size here. I like this one better than the first because I wanted it to look thin like the movie's monsters and this came close to it. But I also wanted it to look simple.
It seems my simple mind cannot comprehend the word "simple".

Techy stuff:
• Runs really fast
• Loads of metal, lots of bones
• Sharp blades for tail tip that can spin and grasp things (would this make it a lioness?)
• Likes swatting its tail for major damage
• Accordians for certain joints (tail and "elbow")
• There's a belt on it (for reasons I don't know)
• Corkscrew springs for ears
• Non-matching feet (I noticed later the back one looks like a mutated high-heel)

More to come.


Time • 1 Hour
Date drawn • August 29
Tools • Bic mechanical pencil and normal 2HB pencil
Edited in MS Paint & Artweaver
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Comments: 20

Takkana [2010-08-27 03:35:35 +0000 UTC]

whoah... if I credit you, can i use this thing's traceline for my Splicers? it's almost exactly like them! *chibi* pleeease?

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kaitoupirate In reply to Takkana [2010-09-12 04:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Um, sure! Send me the link when you do it!

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Takkana In reply to kaitoupirate [2010-09-15 23:54:23 +0000 UTC]

[link]

moving profiles an' stuff...

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luvthecloudydayz [2009-09-24 01:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Badass line work.

Badass creature.

Cool.

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kaitoupirate In reply to luvthecloudydayz [2009-10-01 23:43:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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tunnelinu [2009-09-04 15:15:48 +0000 UTC]

coming along nicely, but truthfully...it reminds me of a beast of 9 monkey.
I think it's awesome, but I believe that you can do even better on this, but that's just my opinion.
The legs are sweet, and I love how you did it's tail. Grasping claws are awesome!

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kaitoupirate In reply to tunnelinu [2009-09-04 21:05:48 +0000 UTC]

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...good grief, it does look like a monkey


and thank you very much!

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tunnelinu In reply to kaitoupirate [2009-09-04 21:57:45 +0000 UTC]

It's still wonderful! Just keep up the good work!
Don't give up! Try and try again!

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kaitoupirate In reply to tunnelinu [2009-09-05 00:01:07 +0000 UTC]

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tunnelinu In reply to kaitoupirate [2009-09-05 00:49:55 +0000 UTC]

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Rindama [2009-09-04 01:59:33 +0000 UTC]

this is awsome your gonna do great in the contest! i bet you that you will beat me

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kaitoupirate In reply to Rindama [2009-09-04 21:02:21 +0000 UTC]

aww don't say that!
you never know what'll happen!
but thank you!

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Rindama In reply to kaitoupirate [2009-09-05 13:44:08 +0000 UTC]

true and your welcome

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contox [2009-09-01 01:01:52 +0000 UTC]

A bit more detail, and this would be INCREDIBLE. Good job, but I suggest touching it up a bit.

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kaitoupirate In reply to contox [2009-09-04 03:38:03 +0000 UTC]

Have any suggestions for the areas I could try detailing? Like what should I edit?

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contox In reply to kaitoupirate [2009-09-04 23:51:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, I just think it looks a bit sketchy. If you clean up some of the lines, make the shading a bit more solid, I think it would make it look much cleaner and more professional. It looks awesome as is, but it looks rather quickly done. No offense.

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kaitoupirate In reply to contox [2009-09-05 00:02:02 +0000 UTC]

ah okay
I'll see what I can do!

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kaitoupirate In reply to contox [2009-09-02 06:55:52 +0000 UTC]

I'll see if I could do that, but I'll have to rescan it and whatnot I'll keep you updated, let me know your opinion! ^_^

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LemonMogi [2009-08-31 00:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! You really put together some interesting objects to make a cool beast :]

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kaitoupirate In reply to LemonMogi [2009-09-01 19:21:02 +0000 UTC]

>{}< thank you!

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