idefix5360 [2012-11-19 23:28:46 +0000 UTC]
Out of curiosity I followed the link you posted in your comment on Jankolas's piece. I must say, this is brilliant and well worth the read. The conclusion is so beautifully conflicted.... Congratulations on a tale well told. The style you write in is similar to that of a good friend of mine, which I thought was interesting. Short stories like this are the best cure for flunks and writer's blocks.
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Kalapini In reply to idefix5360 [2012-11-20 03:13:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, at first it was just going to be Oran going off to war or something but I decided I wanted to do something that was a little different with it. I'm glad you liked it, and thank you as well for the fav and the comment where I posted it on Jankola's picture This style was a bit of an experiment, it just seemed to suit the picture. I've never really tired short stories but this helped so I might stalk some other deviants and write some more
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