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I have no idea what this is. Not a dog not a bird not a lion not a platypus. I crumbaHence i'm SO lost on the anatomy, especially those back two legs, i sorta wanted for it to look as if it was semi turning and coming out of a circle sorta movement?
So much is wrong here, the neck as well the face the ears theeverything
Help. <33
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Personally I think this is wonderful, it was exactly what I was looking for. This will work so well with my hound, I love your style.
Even though you have pointed out a few issues that you have with it, I think it looks lovely ^^
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Very special design, rather unique 
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Ah yes, looking back now i would have as well - it would have bulked it up a lot more
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Lol., xD Brilliant though~!
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I sooo wan to redline this 4 uuuu! 
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I'm sooooo bad at drawing canine anatomy, but I can spot some things.
One: Either the legs need to a bit thicker, or the paws need to be more greyhound-ish. I would suggest just beefing out the spindly legs because the rest of the body is a more heavy-set design.
Two: the left front leg needs to be slightly shorter so it lines up better with its hind counterpart. Just doing a straight line under the other paw will give you an estimate on where you should put the bottom of the front.
Lastly: The nose sticks out slightly. maybe flatten it slightly and pull it back?
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Oooh ok ty, Yeah i have since beefed up the legs and paws and made the legs the same length etc (in a copy i have in PS) It's the the two back legs i'm having trouble with?
I will fix the nose and very useful tip for the hind leg and fore left, thank you
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UM all can think of is fluffing up the upper butt and there's a line of skin between the abdomen and the leg that I don't think you have...
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Oh its lovely!
I love your style of drawing.
Only think I can see if the front legs, the left one in paticular took a tad on the skinny side
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Lol which style? I have about 48765 lol
Yeah, i need to bulk them up a bit for sure
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ooh, i really like this one!! its a verry intresting canine creature you got there, and the only things i see wrong are.
1.the back left leg needs to have a longer thigh and the leg needs to bend a little more or it looks as if the leg is being held out away from the can instead of moving forward.
2. the ribcage is a little to long and big, maybe its just a style your going for, but yeah. X3
3. the right arm needs to be just a tiny tad longer to mach the other.
so all in all just little things, it looks great as is, cant wait to see if finnished. ^_^
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Thanks! Ooooh yeah yeah makes sense
Again that ribcage has come up so that defiantly needs a fix then, and haha, i always draw legs at different lengths :\
<3 Thanks Ben
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Hmm I really like how it's coming out ^^ XD though I think the rib cage looks a bit to big/long. I would offer a red line but I SUCK at them. as for the back legs/paws the farthest one (the left hind?) looks like it's turned to far towards you. also I think you might want to make it more apparent with the torso that it's turning but I think if you shorten the ribcage a bit that it will help.
but over all it's hard when your not really sure what you are using as a base for your creatures body. I would suggest thinking a little more of the different body types of animals and the look you are going for. then try and incorporate the different anatomy's into one creature. ^^ personally that's how I tend to draw things..
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Ooo ya i'd agree totally with the ribcage being too long, not sure which back leg, it's left hind or the hind leg on our left? The one with more toes and on the ground?
Yes thank you, that makes sense, and yeah it does make it hard haha, thank you - i will consider that more with the next one i do
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no the one with only two toes visible. it really looks awkward to me.
^^ well I'm happy if I helped you at all XD and I SOOOOOOOoooooo look forward to seeing more for these arts
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Ahh and ya i thought the same, thank you
<3 More to come then
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No problem though I don't think i was much help XP
XD <3
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I really like this, Lauren, I hope you do the realism thing with it, it would be lovely. c: <3
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I just did another design like this but it's a serval thing O: <3
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ohoh! i love the face! very nice<3
you've been posting such great stuff!
did you want them to be turning toward the viewer or away?
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Aw thanks <333 its sort of walking at the angle kinda away lol
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oh haha xD regardless, i love it~
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