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kalitarq — Demon Girl(Final)

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Published: 2016-04-04 05:47:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 328; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Description This is all im going to do for this piece i really like her as it is there are still some things i could have polished but i like them there giving it the rough touch
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Comments: 19

alterclosedbox [2016-04-06 04:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! i like the color palette in this one, and the character herself.

and, since you asked for my opinion, i can give you some pointers :

- body proportion is a little off, i think she leans back a little too much, it looks kind of unnatural.

- i think one of your main problem is the way you brush, it's kind of lacking in definition and contrast.
  it feels like you hesitate when you pick colors and brush it on your piece, at least that's what i thought,
  because i feel that way when i first started digital painting. (about 4 years ago i think, haha)

- following my previous point, maybe you could start with a harder brush, with contrasting color to give a strong starting point

- and a little tip; you could use mixer brush tool with a smooth brush to soften and even out the colors in your drawing.
  the first time discovered that tool, it felt like a godsend to me ( i don't know if it applies to you too though )

well, that's from me, i'm sorry if it come off as harsh or contemptuous, but i hope you learn a thing or two from it and do even better next time!
also, you are welcome to ask for more opinion or critique from me should you need it

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kalitarq In reply to alterclosedbox [2016-04-06 05:45:52 +0000 UTC]

For quite some time i`ve been commenting your work with what i think is wrong because i believe we get better with people pointing out whats in theyre mind is not right..... so thank you very much for your honest and well lets say professional opinion because you gave me some good advice We can only get better with time  

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alterclosedbox In reply to kalitarq [2016-04-09 05:06:03 +0000 UTC]

sorry for never done the same to you while you've done so much to me.
most of my friend don't like it when i comment on their works, because i'm the type of person who don't hold back my word.
so, most of the time they say that i sound "Harsh", "contemptuous" or "arrogant"..
..then again, that's why i don't have many friends to begin with haha

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kalitarq In reply to alterclosedbox [2016-04-09 07:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Lets get some things straight then you see when i show my work to my "friends" they all say awesome great and such but as an artist(or at least a beginner) you know how we see our own mistakes and we dont fix them only because it looks good now but when some1 points them out to you, you try to fix them just to improve yourself thats why i love making comment that might seem harsh. This is what i believe some agree with me some dont the only thing i dont accept is sweet talk based on "friendship" 

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alterclosedbox In reply to kalitarq [2016-05-20 04:01:35 +0000 UTC]

IKR ! i usually don't sugarcoat my word just to please people, i said exactly what i meant to say.
also i don't get why people likes play riddle games with me, i don't have time for that, if you want something from me, just say it.

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vea-fressia [2016-04-04 17:32:59 +0000 UTC]

really love the color combination and how you make it seems texture-ly is dis even a word good job!  

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kalitarq In reply to vea-fressia [2016-04-04 19:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks glad you liked it

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vea-fressia In reply to kalitarq [2016-04-06 17:45:37 +0000 UTC]

no problem!  

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Connan-Bell [2016-04-04 13:47:08 +0000 UTC]

She seems to be wondering if her nails are long enough. 

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kalitarq In reply to Connan-Bell [2016-04-04 13:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Never thought about it it really does look like that doesn`t it.

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YukiSenmatsu [2016-04-04 08:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Wicked awesome

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kalitarq In reply to YukiSenmatsu [2016-04-04 09:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks:3

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YukiSenmatsu In reply to kalitarq [2016-04-04 09:36:46 +0000 UTC]

 

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anna-kingdomfan [2016-04-04 06:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful !!!!!

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kalitarq In reply to anna-kingdomfan [2016-04-04 07:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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anna-kingdomfan In reply to kalitarq [2016-04-04 14:58:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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BlackSpiralDancer1 [2016-04-04 06:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Oooh nice! I love the colour combinations, and your style is really something to be admired, along with this character herself!
All in all, a lovely piece!

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kalitarq In reply to BlackSpiralDancer1 [2016-04-04 06:13:28 +0000 UTC]

This is the first time someone flat made my day thank you so much for the comment :3

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BlackSpiralDancer1 In reply to kalitarq [2016-04-04 06:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah? Well I'm honored to be that someone; you're very welcome!

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