Comments: 19
alterclosedbox [2016-04-06 04:54:14 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! i like the color palette in this one, and the character herself.
and, since you asked for my opinion, i can give you some pointers :
- body proportion is a little off, i think she leans back a little too much, it looks kind of unnatural.
- i think one of your main problem is the way you brush, it's kind of lacking in definition and contrast.
it feels like you hesitate when you pick colors and brush it on your piece, at least that's what i thought,
because i feel that way when i first started digital painting. (about 4 years ago i think, haha)
- following my previous point, maybe you could start with a harder brush, with contrasting color to give a strong starting point
- and a little tip; you could use mixer brush tool with a smooth brush to soften and even out the colors in your drawing.
the first time discovered that tool, it felt like a godsend to me ( i don't know if it applies to you too though )
well, that's from me, i'm sorry if it come off as harsh or contemptuous, but i hope you learn a thing or two from it and do even better next time!
also, you are welcome to ask for more opinion or critique from me should you need it
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alterclosedbox In reply to kalitarq [2016-04-09 05:06:03 +0000 UTC]
sorry for never done the same to you while you've done so much to me.
most of my friend don't like it when i comment on their works, because i'm the type of person who don't hold back my word.
so, most of the time they say that i sound "Harsh", "contemptuous" or "arrogant"..
..then again, that's why i don't have many friends to begin with haha
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alterclosedbox In reply to kalitarq [2016-05-20 04:01:35 +0000 UTC]
IKR ! i usually don't sugarcoat my word just to please people, i said exactly what i meant to say.
also i don't get why people likes play riddle games with me, i don't have time for that, if you want something from me, just say it.
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vea-fressia [2016-04-04 17:32:59 +0000 UTC]
really love the color combination and how you make it seems texture-ly is dis even a word good job!
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Connan-Bell [2016-04-04 13:47:08 +0000 UTC]
She seems to be wondering if her nails are long enough.
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YukiSenmatsu [2016-04-04 08:57:00 +0000 UTC]
Wicked awesome
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BlackSpiralDancer1 [2016-04-04 06:01:01 +0000 UTC]
Oooh nice! I love the colour combinations, and your style is really something to be admired, along with this character herself!
All in all, a lovely piece!
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kalitarq In reply to BlackSpiralDancer1 [2016-04-04 06:13:28 +0000 UTC]
This is the first time someone flat made my day thank you so much for the comment :3
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BlackSpiralDancer1 In reply to kalitarq [2016-04-04 06:22:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah? Well I'm honored to be that someone; you're very welcome!
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