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Kamden โ OIAI Ch. 2-2
Published: 2008-03-23 01:31:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 8454; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 67
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Dangit Kishimoto! Why did you choose such tricky hand seals for jutsus?!
Ugh, that's definitely something else I need to improve on. DXBy the way, Hidoi is supposed to be left-handed, if any of you have noticed. That's not an accident at all. XD
Naruto (c) Kishimoto Masashi
OIAI (c) Me
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So much onomatopoeia XDDDD
I like how you drew Deidara
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Awwww I'm so curious.
*looking forward to next page*
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YAY! 
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Awesome Deidara fan fic! I have not watch the shipuuden, but is there a part what goes about deidara's past?
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The anime hasn't shown any of Deidara's past. I'm using Deidara's flashback in chapter 359 in the manga as a reference for my story.
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Nice like it
Love it how you draw the chars^^ Looks nearly like some kishimoto art
Just the background is kinda empty (except the ground of course^^)
But since I know its so damn hard and just arrrg to draw background its ok for me
Iยดm looking forward to the next pages of your doujin
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Thank you! And yes, I do need to work on those backgrounds. The background in Ch. 3 particularly makes me nervous (though we're not there yet).
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yeah but as I said, theyre not thaaaat important. Your works a totally fine anyways
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I, like everyone else, am very eager to see what Deidara has up his sleeve. And I like that Hidoi-sensei is a lefty. It's cool.
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Darn you for leaving me on a cliff!! D< But it was awesome anyway!! Can't wait for the next!
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This is great, I like the way you have the action down, it has a nice sense of flow to it. Good job!
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Thanks! Hopefully, I will be able to continue this kind of flow throughout the spar. *crosses fingers*
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Nice observation. XD Deidara is a bit frustrated at something in particular, and you will find out what in the next page.
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yay!
I really wanna see more
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Boy you drew the hands really well, especially the signs.
Hmm, hidoi means terrible. Is that a clue to the sensei's personality? Just wondering.
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Hmm, I was going more for the translation of "harsh/severe," which refers to the strict and grueling kind of training Deidara has to endure.
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Yeah that's what I meant. "Terrible" isn't the best word for it, but that's what my Japanese textbook said so that word came up automatically. "Severe" is the better way to put it.
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Yaaaaaaay we missed you, Dei-kun!
And the hand-signs are INSANE. How do they do them so fast? And... Haku's supposed to be able to them them with ONE HAND BECAUSE HE'S SO FAST?
*foams*
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some of the hand signs I can't even do myself D:
XD
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Great work ^^, i cant draw hands or handseals well
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Looks good-the scratch marks make it look like they've been sparring for a while, works well!
And I also like Deidara's expression in the fourth panel, the open mouth makes me chuckle.
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omgomg *__* I see page TWO
niice work..still amazed by it 
Dei look's soo cute while he is training
Keep up a good work hun
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Ohhhhh finally we can see deidara speaking a "common language" 
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Thank you! Now that Deidara is speaking the common language, more of his personality can finally show up.
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