greywolf8029 [2004-03-08 02:20:02 +0000 UTC]

I have to say one of your better works. I mean it. I gets the point across. It's not overly complicated and it's powerfull all the same.

Ah it is but a heart broken or a lover jilted that sets the muse aflame.

But in your case it might just be the opposite eh? Hahaha. Keep it up bro.

A dead poet till the end!

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chilipalmer [2003-06-24 23:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Just wow *is speechless*

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icriedthismourning [2003-06-10 06:46:14 +0000 UTC]

i like it very much, i know what you mean...i can relate. thanks for complementing my peom four letters, it means alot to have some one appreachate your work, ya know? i like your strong use of words, it really gets the mood in

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captainpugwash [2003-05-28 11:24:05 +0000 UTC]

This is cool. I thought i wrote some stuff that was pretty emotional.... I'm left standing by this.

Stirring stuff, emotional and well written.
cool

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yuna-chan [2003-05-20 18:18:19 +0000 UTC]

me love this ^^

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vampriss [2003-04-25 17:22:25 +0000 UTC]

Woah. Really good stuff ^^. Very emotional, I like it!

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metalkat [2003-04-23 16:42:40 +0000 UTC]

wow. very deep. I thought it fit together very nicely. You really have a way with words.

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saturnfairy [2003-04-18 15:05:23 +0000 UTC]

i like this one as well...very stirring...odd rhyme scheme...it works well

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unheard-voice [2003-04-18 03:11:33 +0000 UTC]

i agree, very well done. keep it up.

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crimsonskyez [2003-04-12 18:55:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow... excellent usage of words. Such strong emotions in there. Great job.

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