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Kanade-Akaihana In reply to LukeSylveon [2016-08-05 06:34:48 +0000 UTC]
Ahaha, no, your eyes decieve you not, my friend.
(That Xiumin gif will be forever relevant.)
Thank you so much! I am happy it didn't disappoint, and hopefully I can do a good job with the rest. (It's my favorite SuzaLulu doujin as well XD. I'm so glad someone else is on the same page.)
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LukeSylveon In reply to Kanade-Akaihana [2016-08-05 07:19:30 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome. But might I suggest a beta-reader, for this and next chapters to come? I mean I couldn't help noticing some grammatical errors... That could help polish the story up a bit.
Of course, you don't have to if ya don't wanna have one. (^v^)
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Kanade-Akaihana In reply to LukeSylveon [2016-08-15 04:20:28 +0000 UTC]
Ahaha yes. I agree with you. I tend to write at night as a way to wind down and so I end up finishing pieces around 3 in the morning (>_>). Going that late into the night/morning(?) sets me up for making silly mistakes as my brain becomes fried into one long run-on. I apologize for the errors and seedy grammar. I don't know where I would find a beta reader though.
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LukeSylveon In reply to Kanade-Akaihana [2016-08-15 18:27:03 +0000 UTC]
Nah, it's okay, but I was actually offering to be your beta-reader earlier though... If that's all right with you?
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Kanade-Akaihana In reply to LukeSylveon [2016-08-15 21:06:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh! I didn't even notice until you actually said so. Wow. I'm sorry!
Yes, that would be wonderful! I gladly accept your offer. I use Google Drive, so I'm hoping that works for you, as well?
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Kanade-Akaihana In reply to LukeSylveon [2016-08-15 21:52:31 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I'm sorry. I never use Microsoft. I'm always writing on my phone late at night, so I use Google Drive. (My apologies if it's inconvenient) My email address is "kanakohirosaki@gmail.com". We can communicate through there rather than on the comment section of this fanficiton and I can link you to the drive folder.
Just a side note: you won't judge me for writing smutty content, right? I just don't want to gross you out, make sure you know what you're signing up for as my beta reader.
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Kanade-Akaihana In reply to LukeSylveon [2016-08-15 22:06:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank goodness
I'll shoot you an email right now just so you'll have me in your inbox. I'm not sure how you would like to help me edit, but we can wing it. And sure, I'll give you the folder link via note.
Thanks again so much for doing this for me. And please be forewarned, I've been on hiatus for about 4 years. So everything I have written is literally 4 years old. My writing and my attitude sucked back then, so please excuse me. I do need to edit my fanfictions before I make new ones.
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LukeSylveon In reply to Kanade-Akaihana [2016-08-15 22:07:36 +0000 UTC]
All right, no problem~ I'll check my email in a moment, then.
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SilverFoxRedRose [2015-01-02 03:39:52 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to see the next chapter!
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