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Published: 2003-09-08 23:55:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 19
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Description Your blind to the world,
and everyone around you.
I’m standing here screaming,
but you haven’t got a clue.

How can you not see me,
I’m standing right here.
Crying to know your feelings,
but emotions are left unclear.

I keep pressing on,
fighting a uphill battle.
Just as I gain ground,
I trip and stumble.

I hear of your pain,
they tell me you cry.
Inside knowing I can’t help,
makes me wither and die.

Why am I,
bound to this fate.
Eroding loneliness,
love; replaced by hate.

I’m trapped here,
in this nightmare of a dream.
Coursing in my mind,
the sobbing voices begin to scream.

I reach for you,
to see if your there.
You only look at me,
blank face; blank stare.

Once a passionate love,
grown lifeless and cold.
I’m determined to save this,
memories of you will never grow old.

My thoughts driving me crazy,
insane in my own mind.
I watch you walk around sightless,
why are you so blind?

All you want,
is someone to care.
Whether you know it or not,
I’ll always be there

Dry my tears,
and I’ll look to the sky.
Dreaming of the day,
when together we fly.
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Comments: 12

morbideuphoria [2003-09-16 22:22:31 +0000 UTC]

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morbideuphoria [2003-09-16 22:22:30 +0000 UTC]

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kandykim In reply to morbideuphoria [2003-09-16 22:45:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, back

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morbideuphoria In reply to kandykim [2003-09-17 00:07:47 +0000 UTC]

yay

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heartstaken [2003-09-10 06:37:27 +0000 UTC]

may i ask if its about someone present or someone who is already 'flying'?

I’m trapped here,
in this nightmare of a dream.
Coursing in my mind,
the sobbing voices begin to scream.

i love that.. welli love the poem.. thus the reason i am faving.. but the nightmare of a dream ........
joey

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nxoxtxhxixnxg [2003-09-09 21:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Dry my tears,
and I’ll look to the sky.
Dreaming of the day,
when together we fly.

i love these lines... wow. i wish i would have thought of them. wonderful poem... thank you for sharing.

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kandykim In reply to nxoxtxhxixnxg [2003-09-09 22:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! It took me forever to write this! Thanks for the comment!!

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soulburntdown77 [2003-09-09 19:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Once a passionate love,
grown lifeless and cold.
I’m determined to save this,
memories of you will never grow old.

Hey, I remember that stanza

Awesome poem, Kim. I know what you put into this - Your heart and so much emotion ... Nice work, Kim, glad I could help with it

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kandykim In reply to soulburntdown77 [2003-09-09 19:14:41 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU FOR THE HELP!!!!!!!!!
Yah my heart has a lot of things in it...
Thank you so much for the comment!!!!!

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NeoPiter [2003-09-09 01:11:12 +0000 UTC]

I find it similar in some parts to my poem called "My Tears". But it's even better

Pedro

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kandykim In reply to NeoPiter [2003-09-09 01:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll have to check out your poem! Thanks for the comment!!!

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NeoPiter In reply to kandykim [2003-09-09 01:18:11 +0000 UTC]

It's on my gallery

Pedro

Nice job

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