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Published: 2003-11-06 00:43:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 14
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Description Shattered light where I stand,
flowing through me all around.
Darkness swallows this despair,
in the chambers where life is found.

Crawling through broken glass,
all the shredding pain held in.
Maggots and worms flock to consume,
they wrench their way into my skin.

The parasites feast on me,
but I have nothing left to give.
Squirming to my heart looking for life,
a emptiness I’ve learned to live with.

My fingers are to tired and weak,
to hold a grip on the gate.
I’m locked out of paradise,
mine is a heaven less fate.

My stomach knots and twists,
and it’s a struggle to breath.
Tears form when I remember,
this was a pain you used to relieve.
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Comments: 19

kbspe [2004-01-13 02:29:07 +0000 UTC]

i love it...you write so beautifully kim another amazing poem.

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kandykim In reply to kbspe [2004-01-13 02:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Krista! It makes me happy that you like my writing

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kbspe In reply to kandykim [2004-01-13 02:54:15 +0000 UTC]

pff, EVERYONE likes your writing kim you are awesome.

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kandykim In reply to kbspe [2004-01-13 03:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, No YOU ARE awesome Krista!

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heartstaken [2003-11-11 20:53:55 +0000 UTC]

you did well dear.. there are a few gram errors... but I do it all the time..
a emptiness I’ve learned to live with.
an emptiness
My fingers are to tired and weak
------------------too tired

and then breath should be breathe.. it reads differently...

just my imput lovely job though dear...
joey

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kandykim In reply to heartstaken [2003-11-11 21:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for picking up on that, serves me right for typing that out when I was so tired Thank you for the comment

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Britty121 [2003-11-09 01:15:44 +0000 UTC]

kimmie, your poems are never a dissapointment LOVE YA GIRL!

Britty

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kandykim In reply to Britty121 [2003-11-09 17:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you hunnie!!!

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studio713 [2003-11-07 04:17:37 +0000 UTC]

This is beautifully written and emotional. I love it.

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kandykim In reply to studio713 [2003-11-07 19:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Your such a sweetie, thank you so much

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EclipsedMeh [2003-11-06 17:41:03 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful

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kandykim In reply to EclipsedMeh [2003-11-06 21:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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zedman [2003-11-06 02:37:50 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is cutting. I felt like that at times, probably will in the future at times as well. its hard.

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kandykim In reply to zedman [2003-11-06 12:58:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment!!! I'm sorry you've felt this at times, its no fun...

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anaemic-n-sweet [2003-11-06 01:57:10 +0000 UTC]

very nice - gud choice of words!! - liken it alot
YEW!!!!

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kandykim In reply to anaemic-n-sweet [2003-11-06 02:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Your such a sweetie, thanks for the comment

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anaemic-n-sweet In reply to kandykim [2003-11-06 07:54:49 +0000 UTC]

no prob yo poem is really guds !

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soulburntdown77 [2003-11-06 01:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Writers block is horrible. I absolutely hate it. BUT on the bright side of things I love this just as much as I did when you showed it to me on AIM NICE JOB KIM!

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kandykim In reply to soulburntdown77 [2003-11-06 02:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Gina!!! Writers block is such a bitch...

But at least I can write something right now Thanks for the comment

Kimmie

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