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Published: 2003-11-24 20:59:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 27
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Description Sometimes I’ll sit and wonder,
and gaze away from shore.
I’m curious if it’d be different,
what I was really meant for.

I sat down and cried today,
I hadn’t since that night.
So many things I should’ve told you,
but the time was never right.

I’ve tried to blur the memories,
of all the little things you’re about.
I just can’t shake it from me,
the feeling won’t get out.

I know my heart didn’t lie,
and let me feel something fake.
After all of the struggle,
I pray it all wasn’t a mistake.

I’ve become impossible,
with every breath that fills me.
Memories gnaw at my brain,
nothing has ever stuck so badly.     

All of the loss one heart holds,
that a smile can’t just smother.
I’ll rise and face another new day,
but sometimes I’ll sit and wonder.
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Comments: 25

scherzando [2004-01-16 15:08:55 +0000 UTC]

I love purple...

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kandykim In reply to scherzando [2004-01-16 22:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Me too

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kbspe [2003-12-27 04:41:57 +0000 UTC]

i love this!!! everyone can write but me, lol...

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kandykim In reply to kbspe [2003-12-27 05:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you so much!!

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broeknarms [2003-12-08 23:27:21 +0000 UTC]

simple rhyme scheme but you pull it off. not bad at all hun.

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kandykim In reply to broeknarms [2003-12-09 01:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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heartstaken [2003-11-25 18:10:20 +0000 UTC]

all I am able to say is that I understand. I love it dear.

joey

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kandykim In reply to heartstaken [2003-11-25 19:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Your the bestest!!!!

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poetgonesouth [2003-11-25 16:33:53 +0000 UTC]

nothing rings truer than the words of the heart, great job, it truly caputrues what I am feeling rihgt now , and what I have felt before..:fav:

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poetgonesouth In reply to poetgonesouth [2003-11-25 16:34:46 +0000 UTC]

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kandykim In reply to poetgonesouth [2003-11-25 19:45:57 +0000 UTC]

Your such a sweetie! That you so much for your support! And for the sweet comment and fav!!!

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CiCaTr1z [2003-11-25 00:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Good stuff kim!

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kandykim In reply to CiCaTr1z [2003-11-25 00:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Why thank yee!

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soulburntdown77 [2003-11-24 23:35:24 +0000 UTC]

*dies of massive heart attack* I love this even more now than when I read it before. Why, I have no idea, maybe because I'm not ranting on hoplessly about conformity. But who knows. Never the less I love it. *pounds fave button* Oh, I know why I like it more...... IM me later and I'll tell ya

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kandykim In reply to soulburntdown77 [2003-11-25 00:17:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww Gina! You really are to awesome

I always, ALWAYS send my poems to you before they even touch DA, I value your opinion very much

SPOOGE SISTER!!!

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xcometx [2003-11-24 22:53:26 +0000 UTC]

You know what? I love your poems soo much

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kandykim In reply to xcometx [2003-11-25 00:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!

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zedman [2003-11-24 22:37:59 +0000 UTC]

I must say this is very deep. It flows wonderfully, and conveys the feeling of a love lost. Excellent poem kim.

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kandykim In reply to zedman [2003-11-25 00:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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spllogics [2003-11-24 22:02:13 +0000 UTC]

wonderful writing. very nice flow also

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kandykim In reply to spllogics [2003-11-24 22:33:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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silverstar-falcon [2003-11-24 21:04:09 +0000 UTC]

thats beautiful

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kandykim In reply to silverstar-falcon [2003-11-24 21:07:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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silverstar-falcon In reply to kandykim [2003-11-24 21:14:43 +0000 UTC]

you deserve it i need work on my writing skills

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silverstar-falcon In reply to kandykim [2003-11-24 21:14:41 +0000 UTC]

you deserve it i need work on my writing skills

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