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KaneTheDFWMSeme — I'll always love you
Published: 2011-07-09 03:01:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description It's been awhile,
Since I talked to you.
I thought over time the pain would go away.
So why hasn't it left?
Why do I want to hold you and cry out the heart break?
My soul is full of ice and my heart has gone cold,
Because I no longer see you.
You ask for me,
I say no again.
It hurts me to know you are happier without me.
Can't I be happy too?
Must I be lost in a dark abyss of despair?
I miss you so much.
I'd give you my heart if I thought you'd keep it,
Or wouldn't destroy it again.
You've got my mind confused.
I never even got to kiss you but maybe I love you.
Do I love you?
Do I know what love is?
I am so lost.
Can I look into those gray-green eyes again?
My body aches from the screaming it did.
Loneliness,
Its my new best friend.
My fingers fly over the keyboard,
I want to make music,
To reflect my mood.
It'd be sad.
If I got to be with you one last time,
I'd tell you one thing.
I'm so sorry I hurt you but I'll always love you.
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Comments: 8

xxmyfateGrimReaperxx [2011-07-09 03:43:22 +0000 UTC]

i loved it.
i like ur style, but when ur typing this up, did you ever stop and think about what to say next?
when i write, i just keep writing. everything that im thinking about.
but i loved how you wrote about the 'fingers flying over the keyboard' cause thats how i feel when i write. but it does kinda hop away from the theme a bit, but you get right back to it, so thats good.
and i also loved how you asked questions. it makes me wonder what you're thinking about. it makes me read more.
but all in all, i loved it. it showed a lot of emotion. and whoever it is, i think its so sweet that you still love them :3

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KaneTheDFWMSeme In reply to xxmyfateGrimReaperxx [2011-07-09 03:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I noticed it jumped around a bit >.< I usually revise it but I typed it like a few minutes ago. No I didn't stop to think what I'd say next. Thanks. Yeah I still love them but it's hard sometimes.

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xxmyfateGrimReaperxx In reply to KaneTheDFWMSeme [2011-07-09 03:52:51 +0000 UTC]

but i jump around too, but i think i got a good balance with it xD it takes practice xD lmao
im glad u didnt stop to think, cause the best ideas just flow. poems are hard, but i write free verse so its easier than rhyming xD

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KaneTheDFWMSeme In reply to xxmyfateGrimReaperxx [2011-07-09 03:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes free verses are. I can't do a rhyming one to save my life XD Yes, I agree.

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xxmyfateGrimReaperxx In reply to KaneTheDFWMSeme [2011-07-09 03:58:58 +0000 UTC]

ive rhymed b4. its not THAT hard...just not as flowy when i write it out

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KaneTheDFWMSeme In reply to xxmyfateGrimReaperxx [2011-07-09 04:05:57 +0000 UTC]

I can't do it lol.

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xxmyfateGrimReaperxx In reply to KaneTheDFWMSeme [2011-07-09 04:06:50 +0000 UTC]

xD its okay xDD its fun tho xDD

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KaneTheDFWMSeme In reply to xxmyfateGrimReaperxx [2011-07-09 04:09:08 +0000 UTC]

XD lol! I bet

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