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xxmyfateGrimReaperxx [2011-07-09 03:43:22 +0000 UTC]
i loved it.
i like ur style, but when ur typing this up, did you ever stop and think about what to say next?
when i write, i just keep writing. everything that im thinking about.
but i loved how you wrote about the 'fingers flying over the keyboard' cause thats how i feel when i write. but it does kinda hop away from the theme a bit, but you get right back to it, so thats good.
and i also loved how you asked questions. it makes me wonder what you're thinking about. it makes me read more.
but all in all, i loved it. it showed a lot of emotion. and whoever it is, i think its so sweet that you still love them :3
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KaneTheDFWMSeme In reply to xxmyfateGrimReaperxx [2011-07-09 03:46:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I noticed it jumped around a bit >.< I usually revise it but I typed it like a few minutes ago. No I didn't stop to think what I'd say next. Thanks. Yeah I still love them but it's hard sometimes.
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xxmyfateGrimReaperxx In reply to KaneTheDFWMSeme [2011-07-09 03:52:51 +0000 UTC]
but i jump around too, but i think i got a good balance with it xD it takes practice xD lmao
im glad u didnt stop to think, cause the best ideas just flow. poems are hard, but i write free verse so its easier than rhyming xD
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