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Kanina-Firefox — First Fire: WIP
Published: 2009-03-19 00:12:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 722; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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I haven't uploaded anything in a while, so I thought I'd show you part of a lil work in progress I've got going.Any crits, comments, suggests?
...Especially suggestions for background. D:
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The wolf or coyote looks like its looking at what sees to be a light. try putting maybe a forest fire or a campfire with people around it and the wolf/coyote is walking on the outskirts of the camp and watching them and smelling the cooking food?
But it looks great
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I like the idea of the campfire, thnx.
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as I was looking at it, (it's awesome btw. I like the style it's done in especially) I thought two things were a little off- the lighting and the absence of shadow. He looks like he's kind of floating on the space... and I'm not sure if it looks like the blue and yellow-ish streaks are backwards.. *questions their own 20/20 eyesight efficiency
but anyways, nice job
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Uh ohes...the lighting combined with the alert look in the wolf's body language tells me there's something bad going on!
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The lighting makes me feel like there's a fire nearby. *looks at title...* 
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My original idea for this picture was canines first sight of man's camp fire.
But I donno anymore. 
Lots of animals fleeing the fire would be a cool idea.
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That would be cool, too. Or maybe you could do two versions?
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