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Kokorococoa [2013-12-31 06:24:27 +0000 UTC]
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This really is beautiful. It's a detailed, proportionate drawing with a light color palette that seems to sway in my vision. Her outfit is cute, especially the furry collar. I love the fluffing and line-work on it. Her face, manga-wise, is gorgeous. I love how some shading can delineate a nose, a mouth, and blush. The eyes have lots of circular lines swooping in, well, circles. The lighting in them is my favorite part of the drawing. If anything about the face, the eyebrows are a little high, and so are the ears. The pigtails are nice, one seems to be in a heart shape, fitting in with the feel of the drawing. The shading is lovely and meticulously done. I wish they would splay out a little more maybe, to make the drawing more alive. What really makes this drawing original is the color. One side, as the drawing is named, is the color of cheese, then switches to an icier blue. (Maybe showing the girl's personality?) Purple oozes here and there, which I really like. The only major critique I have is that it's on the light side. The coloring, while angelic, could be darker so I could see it better, given what a wonderful set of colors were chosen.
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kanoshl In reply to Kokorococoa [2014-01-01 12:18:52 +0000 UTC]
this is a great critique. thanks, i'll do my best for my next artworks to come. uwu
and btw, the colors are just my edits I edited it to make it more.. uh. livelier? XD
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Author219 In reply to Kokorococoa [2013-12-31 15:26:44 +0000 UTC]
I do believe that the purples you are seeing here and there in the lighted area are really just the artist's blues being thrown in to create contrast so you can see it better. The same goes for the color choice, it may be for personality, but I think it is also because complementary colors like red and green, yellow and purple, and orange and blue as seen here are the best combinations for catching a person's eye, which it has obviously done here. I agree they should have created more contrast with each color in and of itself. Otherwise, this piece is definitely a beautiful one.
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xXxBLUExROSExXx [2014-01-31 15:56:41 +0000 UTC]
this is by far one of the best pieces youve done
OMG
so fudging GOOD
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0x0retro0x0 [2013-12-31 18:27:37 +0000 UTC]
;0 awww!! I love this!!! The way you colored this is amazing!!! :3 Super great job!
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Candycanecrafts [2013-12-31 10:30:51 +0000 UTC]
:3 cute! :3 is it possible to make it a little darker or something so that its just a little bit clearer? really good drawing tho! :3
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kanoshl In reply to Candycanecrafts [2013-12-31 13:15:04 +0000 UTC]
sorry i'm not really good at editing and adding some effects XD
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kanoshl In reply to kanoshl [2014-01-06 22:54:30 +0000 UTC]
olooooooooooooool
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Yuh-o [2013-12-31 07:55:12 +0000 UTC]
Yes, cute.
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kanoshl In reply to Yuh-o [2013-12-31 13:15:13 +0000 UTC]
thank you (:
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Yuh-o In reply to kanoshl [2014-01-03 15:08:14 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome.
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