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Published: 2004-03-19 23:10:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 26
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Description That once-warm embrace
Has now turned cold
Brought on by
Those countless lies
Which drown themselves
In their own endlessness
My eyes now reflect
Your apathy
Which you claim
Is of the past
Which is right
About some things
The only thing that will
Stay the same
Is your own
Infidelity.
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Comments: 9

illixim [2004-05-12 04:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Though you say you're not a poet, I believe you should be.

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sobek-star [2004-03-27 03:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Kewl-ness!!! * :claps: for 'non-poet'*

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infidelity [2004-03-20 19:21:00 +0000 UTC]

hehe, my friend sent me this link, because it's my user name. i'm very glad to see it was such a meaningful poem - ít's always refreshing to stumble upon something so well written. you've capture a lot of emotion here, and it's short, but it really feels like you said everything you wanted to. -happy dance for the 'non-poet'-

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karamei In reply to infidelity [2004-03-20 22:08:30 +0000 UTC]

wahh thank you wow, that's cool that its title is your username!

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infidelity In reply to karamei [2004-03-21 15:49:48 +0000 UTC]

hehe. it is! but infidelity is a pretty word and a cool concept, so why shouldn't everyone use it? -spins randomly-

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NorwayFox [2004-03-20 17:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Aww, that was good, Carrie! It was a good poem for a "non-poet." You're good!

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DarkIceQueen [2004-03-20 02:55:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow, all I have to say is one word: Deep. K, I'm done. C ya!

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chaoticdarkness [2004-03-19 23:45:10 +0000 UTC]

I really like it ^__^ it's an awesome piece...better than anything I can think of..short..but powerful...small but meaningful..and that's what makes it great..the way u expressed it

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Solitude-within [2004-03-19 23:21:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, seems like a good enough poem to me, maybe you should become a poet . Well done -goes to check out your art-

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