Comments: 41
mary-dreams [2004-05-20 07:38:07 +0000 UTC]
the colour is fantastic!^^
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frighteningdeceit [2004-05-20 05:31:09 +0000 UTC]
really nice! i love the folds. they look so good! nice perspective with the guy and the gun! ^_-! my fave person in it is the girl at the bottom (you) hhahaha! the sword assassin is cool! nice backgrund too!!!!!!!!!
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beware-the-ides [2004-05-14 23:22:37 +0000 UTC]
wow, its colored! awesome
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DigiAvalon [2004-05-10 03:39:04 +0000 UTC]
The shadeing is awasome, the antomy and perspotions need work, but there isn't an artist here that can't improve on those things. I was reading you jurnal before I came here, I didn't see anyone ripping it apart, but I kinda speed read. Anywho don't worry about it, you have a nice layout going on here which is really nice, each character has there own feel to them, I think you did a good job. So keep at it and don't worry about nasty comments form small minded people.
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SleepingApples [2004-05-10 03:15:37 +0000 UTC]
Ilove trhe pose and colors ^-^ +fav
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jashen2005 [2004-05-10 01:25:39 +0000 UTC]
pay no attention to those who know not art! it is a great piece of art no matter what they say, keep up the GREAT work. god bless.
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DarkPenguin [2004-05-09 23:11:55 +0000 UTC]
Lots of little details. Looks like it was difficult and time consuming. I love the highlights in your pictures and the eyes and hair are lovely.
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maddiemax [2004-05-09 23:02:28 +0000 UTC]
*gasp* I really love your coloring ^^ although the girl on the left seems a little out of proportion? ._. Erm...otherwise, it looks awesome ^_^
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Karst [2004-05-09 21:49:54 +0000 UTC]
awsome!!! i am gonna fave it!!
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wiredgirl [2004-05-09 19:20:10 +0000 UTC]
This is great! :3 I really love the bright, saturated colors and the background.
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commiealex [2004-05-09 18:20:54 +0000 UTC]
Great work, except the gun looks a little wierd
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chaoticdarkness [2004-05-09 17:21:47 +0000 UTC]
that's amazing!! but why *mature* it?..oh well...it's a great piece ^__^..i really like it...I bet u're great at manga drawing..cool how u're making the story and everything ^__^...wellwho cares if it's a little unoriginal..it's great either way ^__^..cool..awesome how u got ur name and ur friends names into it all..heh..well If u change it..good luck with that as well!!hehe..awesome...I truely think it's a great piece..and idea...good luck with everything on this!! it's great so far ^__^..cant wait to see more from this series...heh..well...wow..that's a lot of time..but I think it was worth it..it's amazing ^__^
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karamei In reply to chaoticdarkness [2004-05-09 17:43:23 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment and all the encouragement, but as for "why mature it?" i'm confused... i didn't.. did i? o_O; x_X
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karamei In reply to chaoticdarkness [2004-05-09 17:59:00 +0000 UTC]
urk?! where does it say that it's mature o____o;;; *must..change..* anyhoo if that is so i don't think it would get me in trouble. i've seen things labeled as such but aren't really... o_O but anyway where does it say it's mature!
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chaoticdarkness In reply to karamei [2004-05-09 18:05:51 +0000 UTC]
look right under ur pic...it says something like parental advisory or something..it should be in the box right under ur pic..first thing in the line
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SimB [2004-05-09 14:58:01 +0000 UTC]
Interesting style. The folds are very sharp, but the shoulds of the guy in the top-right stick out a bit too much. Also use some compression on your png because it is nearly 1MB which is far too much.
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SimB In reply to karamei [2004-05-09 15:27:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry to offend you, I wasn't really thinking of the detail and effort that went into the picture when I commented, and I should have at least have included that before posting.
The folds on the tourniquets seem well done, they look really realistic. The folds on the middle girl's top are very long however, I'm not sure they'd usually stretch that far. The collar bones look very sharp also, I would say slightly too sharp when compared the the smoothness of the rest of the skin. There isn't really much muscle/bonage which causes them to stand out that far if you know what I mean.
The reflections on the man's trousers at the bottom are probably two horizontal, perhaps they should stretch up slightly more on the left. There might also be one too many folds around the groin area. The hair is very nicely done though.
I can't find much fault with the girl on the left except that the hair is quite hard to make out. You might want to thicken the lineart a bit around the middle of the hair so that you can make out the seperate clumps.
The background is really cool, what did you use to make it? I can make out the grid, but did you draw all of the other sections? Must've taken ages, there are lots of subtle details in there.
Sorry again, please don't hate me.
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SimB In reply to karamei [2004-05-09 18:07:42 +0000 UTC]
Well if that's the case then it is a nice picture, a different style to most. I'm just glad I didn't upset you, that's all.
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Personacom [2004-05-09 14:56:35 +0000 UTC]
whoooooooo this is so coolllll!! +fav FO' SHO' xD
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