Comments: 51
KanadeTLove [2013-05-18 07:16:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh that was sad
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Kazune-Nishikiori [2009-12-12 11:44:37 +0000 UTC]
omg omg omg. SO HARD 2 BELIEVE!!! great story though! i loved the beggining... it was hot... [link]
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Badger-WOLF [2009-09-23 06:22:40 +0000 UTC]
That was really good but you have some errors in your grammar. Like this sentance: "Slices from a knife were spread across his chest, bleed slide down his chest from the cuts."
it should have "Blood" there instead of "Bleed".
Sorry, I am a bit of a Grammar natzi, but only in stuff like this. In posts and stuff I really dont notice them and I know I make alot of mistakes myself.
But all in all, it was a very good story. I do wish J.D. could have played a bigger part in the end but I still love it.
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gaarasbestbuddy0 [2008-07-18 15:29:15 +0000 UTC]
i really liked this! are u going to continue it? u really should!
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emobabe95 [2008-05-20 22:38:33 +0000 UTC]
wow I loved this story... very sad... you should write some more stories like this cause it was really good
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xXDayenGirlXx [2008-02-17 16:25:55 +0000 UTC]
...Mr. Midget in a bikini? ok i have to lol at that! but seriously this was sad v.v
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Subaku-no-Daikon [2008-02-07 01:47:07 +0000 UTC]
T-this is so SAD!! It's well written, and I like how you write... It's just depressing... I need to go look at puppys or something to feel better... But yeah, your a good writer, and I hope that you continue...
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SLEEG123 [2007-07-27 23:01:05 +0000 UTC]
did he die?
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bored137654 [2007-06-09 16:03:57 +0000 UTC]
I want him to live!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant kat run over to a neighbor and bring them there to save him??! or JD?!
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Kari-Yaoi-Sue In reply to bored137654 [2007-06-12 07:29:55 +0000 UTC]
XD hes going to get someone, you can imagin what happens next :3
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Kari-Yaoi-Sue In reply to bored137654 [2007-10-05 10:15:00 +0000 UTC]
xD then well you'll just have to use techniqual reason to estrablish a reasonable ending xD
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koopinaterx3 [2007-05-10 16:11:12 +0000 UTC]
Wow...that was...really good. o3o
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Setsu66 [2006-12-16 22:56:26 +0000 UTC]
awesome story^_^
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Kari-Yaoi-Sue In reply to rikonailin [2006-12-15 06:14:44 +0000 UTC]
^-^ Thanks!!!!!!
yea, Kenji...he'll be ok...*awkward Gerard smile*
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MoofieHC [2006-12-13 22:11:37 +0000 UTC]
thats scary...good!..but scary!
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TheQueenofSomething [2006-12-12 05:47:23 +0000 UTC]
yell me that JD saves him!!! oh god!!! i want him to live!!!
I love your storys! keep em' comeing!
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Kari-Yaoi-Sue In reply to TheQueenofSomething [2006-12-12 05:49:56 +0000 UTC]
XD Thank you so much!! I will!!!
I want him to live too!! TT_TT he never got to see J.D. again TT_TT
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hentaiko [2006-12-12 00:06:28 +0000 UTC]
*EEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That Was Wicked Scary>
I did love the shounen ai tho:d
But the rest of the stroy was crazy scray>
Great job tho! It had a Very spooky plot>👍: 0 ⏩: 1