Yeezus-Chan [2016-06-02 02:07:39 +0000 UTC]
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Overall, this is a brilliant piece of work and commend your talent! Though I am but a humble graphic design student, there's something that immediately stood out when I first viewed your illustration, which is how MUCH was going on. The girl itself is masterfully done, and your inking skills are b-b-b-bomb, girl. I like the color palette you used and you have definitely mastered the watercolor medium.
However, I couldn't help but feel overwhelmed but the amount of things going on at once. I love the bird, I love the skull, I love the girl, I love the beads, but I'm not sure how much I love it all together. The chain, for example, poses a serious threat to me. Perhaps it had some significance to you or the development of the character as a whole, but to a simple on-looker such as me all the extra is distracting from the focus of the illustration, and the focal point (points?) itself is lost to all of the extra stuff going on.
I read in the description that you enjoy drawing details, and I totally feel you on that, sistah! There is just something so satisfying about putting forth that extra effort and getting that result. However (and I have noticed this in multiple pictures of yours) the amount of motion in them is a tad bit distracting, and perhaps in the future, you can take the whole "less is more" cliche in to consideration.
Overall, though, you have some serious skillz and I hope to see more of your paintings!
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