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Published: 2011-10-22 07:51:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 949; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 9
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Somehow I want to drew this theme, actually I want to give the tittle with random girls as usually if I don't drew my OC but starting now I will give a another strange tittle.I don't know Yestersday, on 19 until 21 October 2011, I went to a retret house / you can call it praying house so....I found so many 'blank' things that I haven't know
Inspiring from the praying house at Bandung, Indonesia
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The only cons that I can see in this drawing are the fact that you drew some of the lines too fine, and that the right leg is a bit too skinny on the bottom part below the knee.
I love the shading and toning on this drawing. The wrinkles, and folds you drew in detail of the overcoat and mini-dress were well done! Very realistic, though the mini-dress had a few TOO many folds at the bottom hem..which is not a good idea, because mini-skirts are tight, like skinny jeans, so they should have lots of movement shown in wrinkles at the top, by the hips and thighs, and maybe by the knee if the knee is knicked.
I noticed you didn't raise the left part of the mini-dress due to it already being very short, but I think you should've done that to show more realism, and added more STRETCH rather than looseness to show how tight-fitting the mini-dress was, plus if the knee was raised like that on the right knee, it's only natural that the dress' skirt would hitch itself up a bit.
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I love your proportioning, though sometimes the neck can get a tad too skinny e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I really enjoy looking at your work, it's creative, unique, well drawn, with high skill and great technique in shading, toning, proportioning and etc. I like the movement you added to her ponytail, each strand of hair was drawn very detailed which pleases the eye ^^ Great job! Keep up the good work!!!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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terinspirasi sama mukanya frater nana kalo gak frater aaron, kl gak frater felix.
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Waduh gak loh bahkan gue gambarny pas lagi bus
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This is really nice! I like how you shaded the clothing and the hair!
I also love how the paper is drawn and is flying everywhere xD!
You did a good job, looking forward to seeing more of your works! : )
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oooo I love how you've indicated the direction and flow of the wind with her jacket and her blowing in the breeze, and the papers flying off into the distance. It looks great I love the shading too, overall great job !! ^-^
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ehehehe thank you so much
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