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Published: 2016-05-23 06:44:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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One of the draw for the art exam, be 100% honest, what do you thinkRelated content
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The art is great, but I think the face should be facing a little bit more to the back. Sorry if I offended you. ;-;'
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It's looks really good but honestly no offense to you at all but the neck should be a little shorter but that's just and opinion
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I think it looks great over all! But if you want me to be totally honest, I think the front of the shirt is defying gravity a little. If the strap was loose enough to fall down her shoulder, I would assume the rest of the shirt would be a bit baggy, too. I hope I wasn't too harsh, I just wanted to help you out
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Don't worry sweetie, that's why I asked for critics^^ thank you very much
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Alright, I'm glad I could help. But really, you did a pretty damn good job on all of your entries or drawings or whatever they're referred to as XD
I wish you the best of luck on your exam on the thirteenth!
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keep practicing, you can do it
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Thank you for the words of encouragement!
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thank you very much!!!!!!! :3
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honestly? and this is just a little thing, i really like the drawing overall!!
see that space between the neck and the chin? it shouldn't ever be a right angle. if you look at people in profile there's this kind of triangle that goes in-between the two to connect them, because if people's heads connected like that there'd be a lot of skin and muscle missing that you need to move your head around.Β
just a small thing to remember when drawing profile. It really helped me figure out the anatomy of the neck and head when i first learned it!!
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wow, i never noticed that, thank you so much!!! Β I will remember itΒ Β
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Legs need to a bit more longer so she doesn't seem short.
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maybe shes short like me XD jkΒ
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X3 I would love to hold you if you were short!!
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Wow! REALLY good detailing! I dunno why, but the socks really intrigue me! XD Anyways, great job!
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Very good detailing and good job on the facial expression
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Thanks ^^, you think is fine, needs something else...?
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Not sure really :3 sorry
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