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Karnelia — Prisoner of Science

Published: 2007-11-11 06:16:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1870; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 8
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Description It wasn’t the boy’s aggravated cries or his captors’ harsh, commanding voices that roused me from the depths of my slumber. Rather the opening of the cell door literally shook me awake, amplifying tremors through my web. Naturally grumpy from this disturbance, I made to get comfortable again and continue my rest. However, I paused, struck by curiosity, as the large humanoid figures dragged one of their own younglings inside the cell, stripping him of his outer garments. He struggled and kicked, howling ceaseless protests until one of them administered him a heavy blow whereupon he curled and fell to groaning, slumping to his knees. Tossing a few white garments next to him, they gave him a final kick and left the cell, closing the door behind them.

I shifted my position, so to better my observation point. The boy was shuffling up to the glowing bars, watching them go. His wrists, I noticed now, were weighed down by equally radiant cuffs. As he neared the iron bars, I could faintly feel the crackling hum of some energized tension vibrating through my web. The boy seemed to feel it too as he recoiled and retreated. He glanced at the pile of clothing and gave an incredulous snort, glancing down at his chains. Crawling back as near as he dared to the vertical shafts, he sat in a fuming silence, no doubt mulling over how he would fight against his captors when they next appeared.

The passing minutes were still and quiet, though thick with the boy’s continued hostile brooding. But eventually, the atmosphere began to slowly diminish, the initial anger starting to wear thin. A sudden shiver ran through the boy’s frame as his blood cooled and the full effect of the chill air overtook him. The rattle of chattering teeth followed soon after and he drew his limbs closer to his body. I could not see his expression from here, but I could tell by his posture he was starting to grow anxious by the circumstances.

Time seemed endless as the youngling sat, rocking slightly, rubbing his arms. White clouds of breath rose in spurts and drifted lazily upwards, disappearing in the darkness above. It was subtle, the change within him, as he slowly turned and grabbed for the white shirt, hugging it close to his body. At last I got to see his face, innocent yet defiant. But there was something else as well; a hollowness in his eyes, a lack of luster or life. As soon as I noticed this, he closed his lids and proceeded to pull the shirt over his head.

To his amazement, and mine, the glowing chains passed through the sleeves like a ghost glides through a wall, ignoring matter and the solid laws of physics. He blinked and muttered a few words, pulling on the pair of whitewashed pants as well. Crawling onto the stone bench beside him, he fervently focused on the glowing cell door as if it would open at his sheer willpower. It, of course, remained a cold and pitiless barrier, unfeeling for the young prisoner’s desires.

I was so entranced by the young one’s intensity that my instinctual circadian rhythm slipped from me completely. I only remembered that I should be sleeping at this hour when the haunting wails of agony and terror bled shrilly through the walls. The boy started at the sound, pressing himself against the freezing wall and shivering. The distant sound of a metallic door and the echo of footsteps followed. It didn’t take long for him to realize that his voice would be joining with the others soon. He let out a low growl like a cornered animal about to be devoured, but it quickly turned into helpless sobs as fear overtook him. The footsteps drew closer and his tears grew thicker, shimmering against his pale skin even in the darkness.

The cell door opened and a white clad man entered, grabbing the chain that was bound to his wrists and tugging forward. The boy resisted, but was forced from his perch and dragged out of the cell and down the hallway; on his way to the first of his new nightmarish routine....

...day by day....

...molecule by molecule...
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Comments: 16

pkmnMARVElJEFFdUNHAM [2013-12-22 22:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh my good! This matches with my idea so much! But instead of Danny being there, it's an OC of mine- his daughter in a few of my stories on a different site. But still... Wow. That is just... It is so awesome. There are no real words to describe how awesome it is.

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Author-of-Insane [2013-11-14 00:59:02 +0000 UTC]

So... This is what would have happened if the Guys in White had snatched him that day

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Tuck96Foley96 [2011-07-17 08:50:15 +0000 UTC]

OMG, OMG, OMG! The picture is AWESOME, and has a lot of feel to it, and the writing is also WONDERFUL!

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Bublio53 [2008-07-08 21:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Omg! this is amazing! The whole thing kept my attention. And it's so sad! At first I didn't know who was telling the story untill I kept seeing the word web and I saw the spider. Also I loved the last words you used. "day by day" "molecule by molecule." So full of detail. ... Faving!

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Karnelia In reply to Bublio53 [2008-07-11 10:01:00 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you so much~! ^w^ I really appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the fave as well~<3

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catholicchick [2008-07-04 21:55:06 +0000 UTC]

That is so sad Your writing is amazing! I love the entire thing! The writing the image definitely fav!

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Karnelia In reply to catholicchick [2008-07-05 04:58:47 +0000 UTC]

Sorry it was so sad ^ -^;; The image came to me in church of all places O_o But I'm really glad you like~<3 ^o^ Thanks for the fave and telling me what you think~<3

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DreamhazeMaster [2007-12-24 06:12:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm impressed, usually people don't got to the effort of telling us a story with their picture. That's the best freaking part! To explain why the picture was dran how it was and why the colors used in it were used. Both the story and the picture are fantastic pieces of artwork.

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Karnelia In reply to DreamhazeMaster [2007-12-24 19:10:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thank you~<3 I almost gave up writing something for it, but it didn't feel right without it. I always end up hating anything I write, but it's worth it if even one other person likes it. Maybe I should try more story descriptions XP
Thanks for everything! ^w^

~<3

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Tokyopoprock [2007-11-12 00:07:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh... I just noticed that cute little spider; why is it asking a question?

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Chouhatsu-Itsudatsu [2007-11-11 06:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Your writing is as FRAWESOME as your art.

This pic is so hauntingly beautiful and provocative. Love the glowy bars and Danny's tears.

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Karnelia In reply to Chouhatsu-Itsudatsu [2007-11-11 07:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~<3 ^- ^

Glowy things are fun~! X3

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Tokyopoprock [2007-11-11 06:37:54 +0000 UTC]

...Did you WRITE that?? <3

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Karnelia In reply to Tokyopoprock [2007-11-11 07:30:58 +0000 UTC]

I did... ^ -^; <3

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Tokyopoprock In reply to Karnelia [2007-11-12 00:06:47 +0000 UTC]

It was AMAZING! All I ever do is write, and I certainly can't write that well! <33 I'm faving this for that passage you wrote~

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Karnelia In reply to Tokyopoprock [2007-11-12 07:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~<3 *HUGS* I'm glad I stuck it out then ^ -^ I almost gave it up halfway cuz I didn't think it was that great..

And to answer below, the spider's just curious XP

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