Comments: 52
Chicken-Priestess [2008-11-01 17:01:56 +0000 UTC]
The pattern in the kimono is lovely! The colors go really well together and I wish more people would use orange!
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Kateyness [2008-09-18 02:39:04 +0000 UTC]
I like the folds and how the hair strands stick out, but don't become crazy and makeyou need to look at it. The only problem that I have is the fact that the lineart sometimes look like its made in photoshop, and then MS Paint. Thats all :>
Excellent job, you are a spectacular artist!
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KarolinaNoumenon In reply to Kateyness [2008-09-18 02:55:53 +0000 UTC]
yea, thats oekaki for ya ._. does not allow smooth lines with that particular brush >.<; that... and im not so skilled with it >.<;
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Kateyness In reply to KarolinaNoumenon [2009-01-22 14:21:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, me and oekaki don't get along very well :<
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Tsukihara [2008-09-16 00:06:29 +0000 UTC]
i'm not in any position to offer any crtique and the only area that i see that needs alil work on ish teh dragon's scales, how it neck should be alil bit thinner towards that head, and what kaede-kit said about it's mane other than that it's perfect 8D
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kaede-kit [2008-09-14 01:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh, you just about nailed the Chinese dragon design!
The ones we have in our house tend to have bigger manes, though, as that's how they fly.
Otherwise it's good.
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KarolinaNoumenon In reply to kaede-kit [2008-09-14 20:16:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh really? I didn't know that, thank you for that little bit of information ^^
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kaede-kit In reply to KarolinaNoumenon [2008-09-14 20:28:48 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, my mom told me that some years ago when she brought them back from Taiwan. I thought it was cool.
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Jarencja [2008-09-12 16:38:27 +0000 UTC]
i know i comment it but
its beautiful!
i tagg you o.o
if you dont have time its ok.more in my journal.
i wanna sory you coz i stil didnt do the club i wrealy dont have time:blushing:
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Relith [2008-09-10 18:55:27 +0000 UTC]
sorry,i fail at critique.
I like it,though. :3
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jonnyelart [2008-09-10 15:01:12 +0000 UTC]
You already know what I think about the folds, ^^.
I love how it looks as an art piece . ^^ I love you too!
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TheAnnMain [2008-09-10 04:25:30 +0000 UTC]
it purty
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animewingsforever [2008-09-10 02:16:32 +0000 UTC]
I like this, the use of color is amazing. it's a great work of art. ^.^
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voltafiish [2008-09-09 12:29:00 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... I think what has been said has, and I can't find anything else. xD
Awesome pic though~ So calming.
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J-Doujin [2008-09-09 07:26:33 +0000 UTC]
Nice work.
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KuroReiOokami [2008-09-09 02:20:05 +0000 UTC]
um... *thinking* Add more shadows to the folds in the cloth, so that the clothes don't look too 3d, but hold off adding too much shadow, or it takes away from the picture. I love it, by the way ^^
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Maex-Artistry [2008-09-08 23:49:35 +0000 UTC]
wow worth the time!
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Merielle [2008-09-08 23:13:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, that's beautiful! I love the overall style of the picture, especially her face. And those patterns are so pretty~
I honestly don't see anything wrong with it. Everything in the picture fits perfectly. Great work :]
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querulousArtisan [2008-09-08 22:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous job on this. The patterns in this are wonderful. I really love the colors, and how the dragon leads your eye to the person in the center.
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Quezal [2008-09-08 21:44:26 +0000 UTC]
omg faeces shud hav mouths n nozes
KIDDING
this is gorge
I wouldnt change any of it
I love the pattern on the kimono
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kodai-hana [2008-09-08 21:21:20 +0000 UTC]
Mostly as usually.
;------; It's gorgeous. Really.
DD: Even though you wasted so much time, and this turned out really good.
< 333
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Tsundernova [2008-09-08 16:47:01 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Really, WOW!
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Umeko13 [2008-09-08 16:00:59 +0000 UTC]
Very lovely. The amount of detail in the kimono and her pose is flawless.
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GoodDevil1989 [2008-09-08 14:33:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh i like this a lot. Great job.
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catrix-reload [2008-09-08 13:29:01 +0000 UTC]
Naisuuu...
Beautiful as usual~~ 8D
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moral-extremist [2008-09-08 13:04:28 +0000 UTC]
I don't even think I can give advanced critique *fails*
This is overall beautiful
I guess.... more detail to the background//an actual background? OTL;;;
maybe add more shadow colors, or deeper shadows to the skin = A =
Although I really do love the use of solid black, and the kimono is so well-detailed, I love the print!! ;___;
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Ogmire [2008-09-08 12:10:40 +0000 UTC]
Looks fantastick, I don't know why you hate this... It's georgeus!
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The1WolfDemon [2008-09-08 11:18:03 +0000 UTC]
absolutely beautiful
i love your attention to detail! ^___^
kindof reminds me of okami (could be because im obessing over okamithese days) O.o
great jorb!
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KarolinaNoumenon In reply to The1WolfDemon [2008-09-09 14:10:52 +0000 UTC]
it is! >_< i beat the game twice and still haven't giotten all of them ;_; that and my ps2 broke _-_ but once i fix it... i'll tyr to get them all XD
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MookieIX [2008-09-08 11:15:29 +0000 UTC]
Awesome..
There's really nothing to say...
=/
It's amazing.
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DirgeofSorrow [2008-09-08 10:04:50 +0000 UTC]
I don't really think I'm qualified to criticize something so beautiful... Uh... I guess maybe the pattern of the clothes ought to be contorted where the fabric folds. It wouldn't be all perfectly straight.
But this is really really awesome, and I'm gonna fave it right nao.
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Dragon-Queen1818 [2008-09-08 07:43:54 +0000 UTC]
i would recommend more variation in the pattern because of the fabric folds, but other than that, it's amazing.
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