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Malusdraco [2011-12-22 21:35:17 +0000 UTC]
OMG this is really awesome!!
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Vannjaren [2011-12-22 15:11:44 +0000 UTC]
WOW! Thankyou so much for such a kind gift <3
I adore the colours in this, and the fur texture on his face is so soft I want to stroke it XD! I also love how intense his stare is.
However, I must kinda admit that the muzzle is definitely too short - it should be almost twice that length, and it looks a bit too canine - Kroven muzzles don't really taper towards the tip and are generally more square, and the males have some slightly longer hair on the chin. His eyes should also be considerably larger (KDs have larger eyes than most mammals relative to head size, especially Vroen ) His neck fur is also nowhere near as thick as that - his mane is vertical, but the fur on the sides of his neck isn't that long. As for the muzzle, I think I know why something is bothering you - his upper jaw and lower jaw appear to be tilted at slightly different angles if you look really hard - it's not that noticeable, but maybe that's what's bothering you.
BUUUUUUT... Vroenfael, like all other Krovens, does have the ability to take on a doglike form, so this looks like a transition between his usual form and his dog form. ^^ Sorry for sounding a bit overly critical, but I tend to be very fussy about my species, and I must say that you've still done a terrific job - I could never shade his fur like that if I tried for a year, but you did that in a few hours. I love this to pieces and I'm flattered that you chose to draw him. Besides, from what I've heard, for other people, Krovens are bitches to draw.
And I really should have made a reference for Vroen, but I'm afraid I just didn't have time - the innaccuracies are therefore more my fault than yours, sorry.
Still, THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU! (hope you don't mind my overly long comment )
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Kasaurus In reply to Vannjaren [2011-12-23 04:36:22 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ;u;
And I'm so sorry for all the mistakes OTL I've been so pressed for time lately and tired from shopping that I didn't go back and fix many of the mistakes I originally would have if I had more time.. D: Perhaps some other time I can draw one with correct anatomy. xD
The muzzle was mainly bothering me because it's too low on the picture, particularly the tongue and bottom jaw, and it's throwing off the composition, but yeah, the angle of the long teeth on the top jaw was throwing me off, so I tried, but failed there, which makes it look like a different angle ouo;
I know how that is xD I barely have any references of my characters, I plan to change that when I can though, I've already started some references hehe.
<33
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TwilitTiger [2011-12-22 01:54:02 +0000 UTC]
Those blues are so delicious *o* I love the way you drew the face overall too, very expressive <3
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Kasaurus In reply to TwilitTiger [2011-12-22 02:17:49 +0000 UTC]
I love working with blues ouo
Thankies <3
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Antisamo [2011-12-22 00:01:49 +0000 UTC]
Like always amazing work~!
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Kasaurus In reply to Antisamo [2011-12-22 00:02:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you <3
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