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HeavensHorse10 [2013-01-04 23:31:34 +0000 UTC]

hi! I jus joined today and I was looking at fanart for warriors and stuff, and i really enjoy the mood i get from this!! rlly remorsfull and sorrowfull and stuff, and i can feel her sadness come through the picture,
but just a few critics!
i think the muzzle is too big for a house cat
and the cheek fur is too long and the ears are 2 big for a regular cat o.O muzzle looks like it should belong to a big cat like a tiger or lion.
cats have very small, rounded and delicate features haha
if you give the cat long cheek fur, it should be repeated through the entire body of the cat so it looks like one of those fluffy persian kitties ) otherwise it just looks unnatural.

the eyes are also way too far back, looks like theyre halfway round the head, and theyre too big.
shading is off, moonlight shouldn't shine on the whole body o.o haha
you should have just added light at the front and left the other side darker in comparsion ))
thanks, hope it wasn't too harsh!!

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Luna-shadow [2012-11-20 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]

This is really good

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ForestStar7 [2012-11-17 19:05:14 +0000 UTC]

KATE
YOU'RE SO MUCH BETTER AND EVERYTHING

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SpiritPickle07 [2012-11-15 23:42:46 +0000 UTC]

I knew right away that that was Greystripe.
Awesome!

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PuppetAngel [2012-11-13 22:41:42 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing, great job! But its very sad!

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cresentsky [2012-11-13 22:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Awesome and sad.

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