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UberNooga [2018-02-07 23:41:09 +0000 UTC]
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Good work on this one. The background looks lovely and the lineart is clean and smooth. Your art style's really cute too! Colours on the characters are pretty goof too. You did a good job with the hands, I can attest to them being a pain to draw. Excellent work on the actual roses too, I can never get them right hahaha. Some suggestions for you in future:
-The character on the right, some of her colours are a bit too vivid, namely the yellow on her hood and her eyes. If you toned them down even just a little bit, it would look much better
-Shading your characters will add a lot more depth and mood to your work. I see that you've shaded some of the background stuff, such as the wing, the eyes and the sleeve insides, but I reckon if you shaded the rest of it, this would look AMAZING
-If you find yourself frustrated with stuff like hands and perspectives, may I suggest a program like DesignDoll? Posing programs can help a lot and make excellent references. I use it all the time and it's really helped my work
Overall, good work! Keep it up, and I hope my advice helps.
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UberNooga In reply to UberNooga [2018-02-07 23:45:49 +0000 UTC]
EDIT: *good instead of goof. WOOPS D8
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SacredSquishy [2018-02-08 22:41:26 +0000 UTC]
All I will say is dis: All of them look badass as fuck. :>
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L-MASTER [2018-02-08 06:19:01 +0000 UTC]
WonderfulΒ
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TiberiumMedia [2018-02-07 23:32:47 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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Shiny-Clef [2018-02-07 22:31:48 +0000 UTC]
It may be difficult to make hands and roses, but AH It looks so great!!
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VectorTorn14 [2018-02-07 20:54:09 +0000 UTC]
A rose doesn't need to mean love. A rose can also mean death. A rose has blood red petals and deadly thorns. A rose can mean an invitation to a date. A rose can also mean an invitation to your death.
A rose is confusing. Death, more so.
But love, the most.
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