CommanderArcadeDoll [2014-11-04 22:44:48 +0000 UTC]
I imagined this page to be more... well, Miku should be a bit dirty from being kicked, slapped, hair-pulled or beaten by bullies.
And, she's should be walking in the streets drenched with tears and covered in dirt. She looks too immaculate for the role of a downtrodden bullied student.
Still, I give u credit for the effort.
(*heightening urge to aid you with your sentences increasing...)
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Katherine-1208 In reply to CommanderArcadeDoll [2014-11-05 01:09:22 +0000 UTC]
Well these were my first pages I'm learning for make them better, and see them more realistic or something like that hehehe....
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