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KatPromessa — When we were young ch.1
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Description .:When we first met, Barbie, was getting married to Barbie:.
Sandra's POV

You were 6 and I was 8.
You where playing in the sandbox with your Barbie's one of them was wearing a white wedding dress while another was wearing a black tuxedo.
At first I thought that it was weird, after all Barbie was suppose to get married to Ken, not some other Barbie, but they where your Barbie's not mine, they could live however they wanted to. Sadly though there where some other kids that didn't agree with either of our thoughts.
They were two bigger kids who were 7, they towered over you being as small as you where.
They saw you marrying Barbie, to another Barbie, and decided that, that wasn't right, so they confronted you about it.
"Why is your Barbie marrying your other Barbie? Two girls can't get married!"
You looked up at them, fear starting to shake in your hazel eyes.
"W-why cant two girls get married?"
You where so young.
So innocent.
You simply didn't understand.
"Because its gross! Girls are suppose to marry guys! They can't marry other girls!"
Yet you still didn't understand.
In your eyes love was love.
Gender didn't matter, as long as two people where happy and loved each other.
But of course not everyone especially the two boys saw things that way.
The older boy, Tristan grabbed your Barbie wearing the tuxedo out of your small hands, and pulled a pair of small blue scissors out of his pocket. He cut off all the hair on your Barbie's head, leaving enough on so it made her look like she had a boy's haircut.
Tristan Johnson and his friend Kyle Peterson then proceeded to kick sand at you.
Tears built up in your beautiful hazel eyes and ran down your sun kissed cheeks uncontrollably, as the boys mercilessly kicked more sand at you. You where helpless being so much younger and smaller.
I couldn't bear to see what they where doing to you, so that's when I decided it was time for me to intervene.
"Leave her alone!"
Both the boys turned around and laughed when they saw me.
"Why should we? She should know that it's yucky for two girls to be togeth-"
Tristan never got a chance to finish his sentence.
Why?
Because I had punched Tristan Johnson in the face.
Tears instantly started to gather at the corner of his eyes, as he ran off to the other side of the playground Kyle not too far behind.
I picked up the Barbie that Tristan had dropped and wiped away a couple of the tears that had continued to fallen on your face.
When you finally opened your eyes, they where full of wonder.
I handed back your Barbie, as you continued to stare at me, eyes wide, mouth slightly hanging open.
Then you held out your small hand to me, and the voice of a little angel rang out to me.
"My names Hanna! I'm 6! "
I held your small hand in my slightly bigger one and shook.
"Im Sandra, I'm 8 sorry your Barbie's hair got cut off..."
you smiled at me, revealing a gap where your two front teeth should have been and started to smooth the Barbie's hair over.
"Its ok! her hair may be shorter but she's still a girl! Girls can have short hair two! One time my mommy had short hair for a really, long time, so now Natasha can look like mommy! Do you want to play Barbie with me Sandra!"
I had just moved to our small town that summer, and was ecstatic to have made a new friend so quickly, even if you where two years younger I didn't care.
"Sure!"
"Ok then you can play with... Arial! Arial and Natasha are in love and where going to get married before those mean boys came over. Do you think its weird for two girls to be together?"
I took your other Barbie wearing the white wedding dress happily and thought about your question a little.
I had never head about two girls getting married, but really why would that matter?
"No why would it be weird?"
You flashed me that same cute little smile again and we finished the wedding between Natasha and Arial.
They kissed, then Natasha picked Arial up as they went off to have their little honeymoon.
I had never thought that meeting you would have such a big impact on my life.
I never thought that, that day at the park would lead to so much more.
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Comments: 37

IDontBelieveInLove [2012-07-01 02:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Really good. I would just recommend correcting the spelling errors (i.e where is supposed to be were). That hindrance aside, it was good.

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KatPromessa In reply to IDontBelieveInLove [2012-07-03 09:14:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you, ya i tend to not really legitimately look over the whole story... its usually because i finish these at like 1-3am so im tired... but thats when my creativeness really comes out so... mhe...

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SolarApple [2012-06-30 06:52:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww! I wish I was 8 again.

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KatPromessa In reply to SolarApple [2012-06-30 18:21:52 +0000 UTC]

lol same XD

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CeasarArcana [2012-06-30 05:51:38 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, my response to those kids might have been that my neighbor and I only had like... 2 Ken's, and countless Barbies...

Anyway, it was a rather nice story. I wish I was as brave as Sandra...

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KatPromessa In reply to CeasarArcana [2012-06-30 18:22:38 +0000 UTC]

i think growing up i only had like 1 ken XD and at some point i know i had a secret wedding with two of my barbies XD

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CeasarArcana In reply to KatPromessa [2012-07-01 00:11:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't recall very well, they all belonged to my neighbor, because well, I'm a boy, so I didn't have Barbies. Though she did give me one when she moved away... Still have it somewhere, I think.

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KatPromessa In reply to CeasarArcana [2012-07-03 09:16:06 +0000 UTC]

i was obsessed with barbies for the longest time... it was fucking ridiculous..
aww thats actually really cute :3

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CeasarArcana In reply to KatPromessa [2012-07-03 17:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Mom has a humongous collection of them somewhere, I never bothered to count.

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KatPromessa In reply to CeasarArcana [2012-07-05 02:15:59 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Aoife246 [2012-06-27 06:04:52 +0000 UTC]

It's a really sweet story.

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KatPromessa In reply to Aoife246 [2012-06-27 06:19:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you and thank you for the

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Isoya-star [2012-06-25 14:37:15 +0000 UTC]

I wish that people would be like you're character Sandra and help others stick up for what they believe in. Things would be better if they were as open as she was. I really enjoyed reading this. i thought that within your piece a deep meaning was there and I think that it may cause people also to question whether there is a reason for it be wrong, which there isn't. But it was enjoyable to read, well done. You should be very proud of this!!! =]

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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-25 18:19:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^
i do really wish that people would be more open to helping others in danger, for me personally i've been raised to fight for what i believe in, and dont let others tell me what to d.
I am very proud of this, this is a story that i actually have an idea of what i want to do, unlike most where i just kinda fill it in as i go.

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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-26 07:27:08 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear. people need an up brining like yours. hahaha, I know how you feel. My sis always shouts at me coz i never have a plot in mind.

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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-26 20:40:16 +0000 UTC]

haha, ya i come from a very artistic family, so with the artisticness comes individuality, which sometimes means i have to take a lot of shit from people but it all pays off ^^ just dont be closed minded, and eventually the people around you will start to act the same way

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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-27 14:53:23 +0000 UTC]

I hate people who think that individuality is something to pick on. Not everyone has to be the same, that's just boring and pointless but I'm glad to hear that you, unlike some, retain their own idividuality. hahaha, sorry but being closed minded is probably natural to me that i won't be able to change and I highly doubt people will start to act the same but I guess it's something nice to keep in mind. Either way, I'll have to carry on reading your work, finished chapter two, have you done any more?

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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-27 19:07:13 +0000 UTC]

ya i hold my individuality very dear and near, there was once a time i tried to act like everyone else around me and i was miserable... thought i was straight, wore girly cloths, had my hair in a pony tail all the time, never wore makeup, then one day BAM! turns out im gay, got a shit loud of black, cut my hair short, wore combinations of cloths that most people gasped at, then just learned to walk through life with a big smile on my face and a middle finger in the air!
yes i do have more chapters i think i've gotten to chapter 6, and chapter 7 is currently being worked on...

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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-28 07:34:12 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear. i've never tried to be anyone else, I jusrt can't be bothered to act the way others want me to. Although i think some people may want me to act different coz i'm kind of a, well, miserable sod as some say. lol. then again i guess there is nothing wrong about seeing what all the fuss is about -_-

That's cool!!!! I'll have to read them when i have time coz i've got tones of exams and mocks to do but will read maybe tomorrow so prepare for a loud of useless comments and faves lol

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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-28 07:51:58 +0000 UTC]

just be yourself, and everyone else will just have to deal with it

ugh i know how that goes! exams, finals and all that jazz are a huge pain in he ass... lol i will be ^^ and i just uploaded the 7th chapter... longest one yet!

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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-28 11:04:02 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!!!! I can read it tomorrow coz I have no exams. i just sat a 2 hour english mock...urgh! lol

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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-29 00:04:35 +0000 UTC]

yay

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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-29 07:26:26 +0000 UTC]

I'lllet u know when i have finished reading them all!!!

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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-29 07:47:05 +0000 UTC]

kk ^^

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Inu333 [2012-06-25 04:44:35 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love this

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KatPromessa In reply to Inu333 [2012-06-25 04:47:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much darling!
the second chapter is already up and the third should be up soon

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xXxSilentLunaticxXx [2012-06-23 15:52:24 +0000 UTC]

I really like it ^^

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KatPromessa In reply to xXxSilentLunaticxXx [2012-06-24 07:18:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you love ^^
i actually just finished chapter two: [link]

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xXxSilentLunaticxXx In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-24 20:50:13 +0000 UTC]

^^ i'll check it out

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KatPromessa In reply to xXxSilentLunaticxXx [2012-06-25 02:54:08 +0000 UTC]

i actually just re-wrote the second chapter, would really appreciate i if you would read the new one ^^
[link]

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xXxSilentLunaticxXx In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-25 03:05:53 +0000 UTC]

I will right now c: and thanks for the llama

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deathlove919 [2012-06-23 10:08:24 +0000 UTC]

sounds like epicness on toast

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KatPromessa In reply to deathlove919 [2012-06-25 02:55:19 +0000 UTC]

i actually just re-wrote the second chapter, would really appreciate i if you would read the new one ^^
[link]

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deathlove919 In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-25 03:09:40 +0000 UTC]

i like it!

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KatPromessa In reply to deathlove919 [2012-06-25 04:47:30 +0000 UTC]

yay

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KatPromessa In reply to deathlove919 [2012-06-24 07:18:40 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you very much ^^
heres chapter two if you want to give it a read: [link]

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deathlove919 In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-24 07:27:48 +0000 UTC]

np and ty yay someones actually up

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