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IDontBelieveInLove [2012-07-01 02:06:22 +0000 UTC]
Really good. I would just recommend correcting the spelling errors (i.e where is supposed to be were). That hindrance aside, it was good.
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KatPromessa In reply to IDontBelieveInLove [2012-07-03 09:14:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you, ya i tend to not really legitimately look over the whole story... its usually because i finish these at like 1-3am so im tired... but thats when my creativeness really comes out so... mhe...
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CeasarArcana [2012-06-30 05:51:38 +0000 UTC]
Ahaha, my response to those kids might have been that my neighbor and I only had like... 2 Ken's, and countless Barbies...
Anyway, it was a rather nice story. I wish I was as brave as Sandra...
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KatPromessa In reply to CeasarArcana [2012-06-30 18:22:38 +0000 UTC]
i think growing up i only had like 1 ken XD and at some point i know i had a secret wedding with two of my barbies XD
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CeasarArcana In reply to KatPromessa [2012-07-01 00:11:50 +0000 UTC]
I don't recall very well, they all belonged to my neighbor, because well, I'm a boy, so I didn't have Barbies. Though she did give me one when she moved away... Still have it somewhere, I think.
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KatPromessa In reply to CeasarArcana [2012-07-03 09:16:06 +0000 UTC]
i was obsessed with barbies for the longest time... it was fucking ridiculous..
aww thats actually really cute :3
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CeasarArcana In reply to KatPromessa [2012-07-03 17:39:58 +0000 UTC]
Mom has a humongous collection of them somewhere, I never bothered to count.
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Aoife246 [2012-06-27 06:04:52 +0000 UTC]
It's a really sweet story.
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Isoya-star [2012-06-25 14:37:15 +0000 UTC]
I wish that people would be like you're character Sandra and help others stick up for what they believe in. Things would be better if they were as open as she was. I really enjoyed reading this. i thought that within your piece a deep meaning was there and I think that it may cause people also to question whether there is a reason for it be wrong, which there isn't. But it was enjoyable to read, well done. You should be very proud of this!!! =]
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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-25 18:19:32 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^^
i do really wish that people would be more open to helping others in danger, for me personally i've been raised to fight for what i believe in, and dont let others tell me what to d.
I am very proud of this, this is a story that i actually have an idea of what i want to do, unlike most where i just kinda fill it in as i go.
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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-26 07:27:08 +0000 UTC]
That's good to hear. people need an up brining like yours. hahaha, I know how you feel. My sis always shouts at me coz i never have a plot in mind.
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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-26 20:40:16 +0000 UTC]
haha, ya i come from a very artistic family, so with the artisticness comes individuality, which sometimes means i have to take a lot of shit from people but it all pays off ^^ just dont be closed minded, and eventually the people around you will start to act the same way
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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-27 14:53:23 +0000 UTC]
I hate people who think that individuality is something to pick on. Not everyone has to be the same, that's just boring and pointless but I'm glad to hear that you, unlike some, retain their own idividuality. hahaha, sorry but being closed minded is probably natural to me that i won't be able to change and I highly doubt people will start to act the same but I guess it's something nice to keep in mind. Either way, I'll have to carry on reading your work, finished chapter two, have you done any more?
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KatPromessa In reply to Isoya-star [2012-06-27 19:07:13 +0000 UTC]
ya i hold my individuality very dear and near, there was once a time i tried to act like everyone else around me and i was miserable... thought i was straight, wore girly cloths, had my hair in a pony tail all the time, never wore makeup, then one day BAM! turns out im gay, got a shit loud of black, cut my hair short, wore combinations of cloths that most people gasped at, then just learned to walk through life with a big smile on my face and a middle finger in the air!
yes i do have more chapters i think i've gotten to chapter 6, and chapter 7 is currently being worked on...
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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-28 07:34:12 +0000 UTC]
That's good to hear. i've never tried to be anyone else, I jusrt can't be bothered to act the way others want me to. Although i think some people may want me to act different coz i'm kind of a, well, miserable sod as some say. lol. then again i guess there is nothing wrong about seeing what all the fuss is about -_-
That's cool!!!! I'll have to read them when i have time coz i've got tones of exams and mocks to do but will read maybe tomorrow so prepare for a loud of useless comments and faves lol
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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-28 11:04:02 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME!!!! I can read it tomorrow coz I have no exams. i just sat a 2 hour english mock...urgh! lol
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Isoya-star In reply to KatPromessa [2012-06-29 07:26:26 +0000 UTC]
I'lllet u know when i have finished reading them all!!!
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KatPromessa In reply to xXxSilentLunaticxXx [2012-06-25 02:54:08 +0000 UTC]
i actually just re-wrote the second chapter, would really appreciate i if you would read the new one ^^
[link]
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deathlove919 [2012-06-23 10:08:24 +0000 UTC]
sounds like epicness on toast
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KatPromessa In reply to deathlove919 [2012-06-25 02:55:19 +0000 UTC]
i actually just re-wrote the second chapter, would really appreciate i if you would read the new one ^^
[link]
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KatPromessa In reply to deathlove919 [2012-06-24 07:18:40 +0000 UTC]
hehe thank you very much ^^
heres chapter two if you want to give it a read: [link]
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