Comments: 21
LetitiaOltean [2014-12-19 18:47:44 +0000 UTC]
i love it
u are a real talent
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blackmanok [2007-01-28 03:43:45 +0000 UTC]
whoa! they really look like brothers! awesome job! i hope i can color like you someday! btw his face seems to scream: "why am i out here?!"
hahaha. i love it.
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kiusa [2007-01-27 21:11:49 +0000 UTC]
Kitty, this is..... scary. Unbelievebly neat but scary o__o
..Is there a doll in that left corner, huh?
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ladyshalafae [2007-01-22 08:17:00 +0000 UTC]
The stark terror on Alexi's face is awesome, and the little doll in the corner adds just the touch of innocence that makes it even more tragic. And the dead brothers look so peaceful.
The water looks good, although it looks kinda of shallow. There's just something about the way the highlights are that make me think of wading along a shore, not the depths of an ocean, especially not the terrifying depths. (I have that same kind of weird phobia about deep deep water) Just from what I remember from being out on a lake, the water acts different in the depths. There aren't as many little waves, since there is nothing for them to stir on, and the light tends to lance straight down, and there are highlights right on the very surface that are pretty mirror-like.
Not that I know how to paint that, but I know more what it looks like.
I have to say that while I can't exactly tell what is sinking into the depths of the ocean (it makes me think it's Alexi's coffin), it is all the more hinting at terror because of that. With the strands of hair floating around, and the rope, and the shapes lurking, I get the impression of some malign creature pulling the family down. That is very cool.
The brothers look great, but all the dead bodies I've ever seen look more fake. Because they don't move any more, especially when they are in the coffin, they have a more plastic feeling. Like perfectly styled hair, and less skin reflection, and a tad less emotion, that kind of thing. I would almost add more color to Alexi, to really make their pallor stand out.
Just some of my thoughts. Because I really think it's awesome as it is, but I would bet you need to hear more than praise.
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ladyshalafae In reply to katya-h [2007-01-24 21:30:15 +0000 UTC]
No no no, that part wasn't meant to say you can't take criticisms. It's just me being odd, since I notice most of the comments you get are just praise, and how wonderful the piece is, even when you ask for critiques. I've just been a lot stressed lately, so I think I've been overly snarky in what I say to people. You take criticisms much better than a lot of other good artists do.
Alexi does look more colorful than the other three, I was just thinking it could be a little more contrasted between them.
As for the water, my family went out to the lake several times a summer, and to a couple of different lakes, too. I can tell you that the bottomless feeling is disturbing. Somehow more disturbing than being in an airplane, because at least your feet are touching something there. Deep water is also a little frightening to people like me who don't float well. I can't even describe the weightless feel of it, because I think a lot of it is just psychological.
And I dug up this link to kind of explain waves, since I know I like learning about things I didn't know before. it may not help you color them at all, but it should give a good why behind waves. I have enjoyed making fun of movies for big bore waves in the middle of the ocean, considering they can't happen without wind. [link]
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ladyshalafae In reply to katya-h [2007-01-29 16:41:43 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. And wind can kick up waves, but it looks kinda choppy and frothy, depending on the intensity of the wind.
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shiru [2007-01-22 07:24:34 +0000 UTC]
that's so creepy ;_;
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KatIsConfused [2007-01-22 05:32:21 +0000 UTC]
wow, really wow
Great job on the water and how his hair merges into it the way it does
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