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Herowebcomics [2018-11-21 19:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Such a cute style!
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sang555 [2011-07-10 23:10:33 +0000 UTC]
wow! your picture is so amazing :joy:
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sang555 [2011-07-10 23:10:31 +0000 UTC]
wow! your picture is so amazing :joy:
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alvichi [2011-06-11 20:37:41 +0000 UTC]
awww another beach one XDD Love it!~
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Perimones [2011-06-10 19:44:20 +0000 UTC]
Aww, this is so pretty~
Great job writing such a long story! It looks like everyone had a lot of fun!
>u< β₯
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MokonaTenshi [2011-06-10 14:43:57 +0000 UTC]
the story got longer XD but still so cute! <333 This drawing reminds me of the episode where they went to the beach and played volleyball 8D haha
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Tacuma [2011-06-10 09:03:04 +0000 UTC]
So cute!!!!
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Tacuma In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-10 16:46:07 +0000 UTC]
Of course, Tezuka took care of everything, so we were all safe!
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NekoRenoChan [2011-06-10 01:25:41 +0000 UTC]
KYAAAAAAAAA!!!!! It's so cute Kauthar-chan! I would love to go to the beach with you! And Missy Taichou says she wants one now. She wants to be put in with someone. She suggested me and her at the beach with Atobe and Mukahi. Maybe with us fighting over Atobe and Mukahi in the back feeling rejected.
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luckynyan4 [2011-06-09 23:48:55 +0000 UTC]
awww,it was a lovely story and the cute art pice helped capture that summer feeling.
I think it would rally be a fun time spending the day on a beach playing games with the rokkaku, they are so friendly and energetic.
Itsuki with his puffs made me smile the most and his same old nande,Bane and Davide- I can almost picture them as they fight whenever a bad pun is uttered lol.
Have fun and hope you win the contest^^ I might join in just for fun haha,I wonder if I can draw you're character along with some others from my friends, will you let me?
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luckynyan4 In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-11 02:55:35 +0000 UTC]
Aww cute, I understand-anyone would rather be in that wonderful world then here haha
I like all of you're fics, you are talented.
I'm not going to write though, Iβm a very lousy writer x) and thank you
Ah great, yeah-It will have around 8 or so characters ^^
Ahh..yeah, I gues I look mostly like one of my chars except I'm not a boy nor have that hair colour lol xD
I see, youβre story should stay in the past tense, since all the action has already taken place from last Monday until when you are retelling it..but present tense is always way better if you want to make the person "live" the story haha is rally up to you,
You can also combine them at times to highlight stuff but you have to know where..and I'm not that good with English orz*is shot*.
You're most welcome dear, I guess now I should get started on my own project lol.
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