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Kauthar-Sharbini β€” At The Beach With You Jams Sid

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This is for POT OC summer contest >
Don't be confuse cos you'll see the characters of POT in bomb style meet you . I believe they can visit bombstyle world . ( It was an old story you might know later )

There are two parts of this story both of them are connected to each other . feel free to read .

At the Beach With You " Kauthar side " [link]
At the Beach With You " Jams side"

At The Beach With You - Jams Side -

Last Monday, as usual Jams gave a little lunch box to Amane -san- at the garden. After he fished eating it " Jams chan are you free on next Thursday ? " he asked her . " Yeah , what's up ? " she replied while she was cleaning the lunch box . " At the blue beach , Team will be waiting , Amane'll be waiting "huh " . She froze " Wha!! beach oh !! OK I can't wait!! " she replied very happily . "uh" he nod " Ok, we'll meet you at station"
On Thursday , Jams chan prepares everything . specially the box lunch . The team has arrived . She can see Aoi kun , Amane kun , Bane san and Itsuki san . "waah !! Jams chan !!" Aoi says that while waving his hand . She waves her hand too and runs into them . " You've come in the main time " Jams is very exciting " we use bus , bus never fail .. "puff" Amane says " OUTCH!!! " Don't say by that way front of people" Amane is hit by Bane san " Why bus is arrives on time ? " Itsuki wondering . "hehehehe " Jams laughs. " She laughs .. puff" Amane do "dajari again XD " David!! I told you !!!" he is hit by him again !! " BOYS STOP !! " Aoi tries his best " Nande Nande she laughs?" Itsuki asking again . It's very nice meeting at all XD

Jams notices something , Amane kun said that all team would be there but .."umm? I don't see Saeki san ? Isn't he coming too ? " Finally the team back to normal " Etto .. yes !! we separate in few times before " Aoi answers " He asks us to arrive at the beach before him " Bane says " Nande?" Jams and Itsuki are saying that . "Nande do you say something same ? Nande nande ? " Itsuki exciting from her " cos I want to know why he left us .? " Jams says that wanting to know the truth . She turn into the team " Is there something he has forgotten ? " Jams asking them . " well He is going to meet some-" " Aoi CAN"T YOU KEEP IT A SECRET !!" Bane -san shouts at him and Aoi apologizing . " Nande they keep it as secret ? ' Itsuki says the team are saying " ITSUKI there is nothing !!" . There is evil smiling in her lip " humm ..? I already know there might be something .. common it's not secret anymore " The team has failed its mission ~ there is a blue color up their head ."eh.. OK .. actually we want to surprise you .. but .." Bane says that with pointless . Jams smiled " don't worry I won't tell him that you were failed to hide it to me , So What is it ?" she says that while pat Bane's head XD . " Sae-san is going to escort Kauthar-- " Itsuki replays . Jams size her eyes " KAU~CHAN!! waaah I'm very happy where is she where is she now ? " she jumps from happiness. " We can't be happy like that .." Bane san said it disappointing. " Why? " Jams questioned . " She didn't reply clearly if she would come or not .." Itsuki says that. Jams smiled and say that in her mind " ehehehee XD So you can't invite her cos they are bunch of boys , I can call her and she will come directly without fearing XD eheheee" her laughing makes team worried . " ano .. What's in her mind ? " Aoi wondering the team is nodding .

"Anyway ..Whatever she would come or not let's walk to the Blue beach before it becomes dark." Bane san says that and everyone is agree with him .
They reach at the Blue beach in few minutes . The smell of sea is refreshing . They ran " Let's play !!" Aoi says . " Let' collect shells ! " Itsuki wants that " swimming racing " Bane wants that . " who laugh first ....puff " "DAVIDE !!" Amane was hit 3ed times . " I think collecting shells would be great in this time " Jams decides that because they are going to wait for Saeki san . " wah you choose my game Arigatou Jams chan " Itsuki san thanks her " You are welcome " .

Aoi-kun looks from far , he sees Saeki-san he rises his hand and " Sae san!!" Itsuki shout " Eh you said that before me " Aoi disappointing" .. Whatever ...Yo~ we are here " . " yea! everyone " Saeki san rises his hand " Sea-san what takes you so long ? " Itsuki asks ." Uh , I was doing some arrangements " Saeki says that apologizing . " ehem .. " Jams wants to know how could he surprise her. " uh .. Oh Jams chan Thank you for coming " Saeki thanks her . " No problem " She turns her face looking at the team " Hi ^-^ " Kauthar says that to her " Kau ! Kauthar !! Chan !!! Keyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! " She jump into her " I thought you wouldn't come " Jams says " eh you thought ? so you know that i will come before ? " Kauthar asks her. Saeki looks at his team with glaring eyes if they have told her about the surprise . " uh is he your little brother ? " Jams pat at him " I'm Hani !" little Hani comes with his big sister requested from family . "We decide to collect shells, do you want to play with us " Jams inviting Kau-chan to play but she refused . Aoi kun decides to play ball with Hani .

At the side of beach , there are Itsuki-san , Bane -san , Amane-san and Jams . Bane san takes the speak for the game rules " The rule is ! each one try to collect 50 shells per 30 minutes " " Nande 30 minutes " Itsuki asks " 30 minutes .. 13 minutes are same ... puff " David !!! " Waaah Bane-san !!! " while Bane-san is chasing to hit Amane , they see Jams takes a move and she already collect 10 shells . " Woh !! we will discuss next time I won't lose on you !! " Bane says " Losing is the lose ...puff" Amene give his wisdom . Bane-san couldn't hold himself " EH ! damn " Itsuki already collect 30 shells . He uses blow his nose to extract shells from down sands . Everyone doing their best . 25 minutes have passed . Itsuki collects 47 , Bane-san 40, Amane 47 and Jams 48 . " EEEh! one more one more !! " Jams very excitement !! " I won't loose on you ! " Amane says " Damn I can't find any shells here I need to go further ! "Bane san worried searching for shells . " Eh Nande Nande there aren't any shells ? " He blows the ground and can't find any seashells . " Yeey!! I found the 49th !!" it is Jams again . " Mada mada !" Bane-san really nervous ! " gotta too... puff " Amane finds 2 seashells. It's equal . There is a little seashell appears near the coast .Amane jumps and Jams jumps into it ,too .
Amane's hand is up Jams's hand " So it's mine cos I was the first !" Jams said that with challenge eyes . " First touch but I was first seeming it " puf" " Amane do that again and Bane hits him . " Oi !! we are collecting you can't hit me !" " I told you to stop !" " Uh No ~the shell !! " Jams screaming !! the shell flies and fells into the sea . Amane quickly swims to get it " Nande Nande !! ? Itsuki surprising , he don't know what happen XD " No no !! It was mine ! I won't loose !!" Jams finds herself in trouble but she sees shell from far near Saeki's legs . She runs for it . While Saeki san is bowing to hold it softly , she appears and grabs it from him " Gomen Saeki san ! " She apologized . " Eh? no it's fine What an action ! " Saeki san is stoned from her exciting . " Keyyyyyaaaa I win I win " Jams shouts with her high voice " mada mada I won ...puff " but Amne gets the falling shell in the same times.
30 minutes have already passed . " Nande all shells has disappeared ? " Itsuki feeling sad . " That's easy because we have two monsters collection" Bane replays while watching them are argue by new style . " I was first ..puff" Jams says " I must be winner .. puff " Amane replays " You can't win against me ..can you ..puff" " Amane said he can , he can drink can of cola .. puff" . Bane -san has reached his limit of angry . his hair burned " Nande nande you are burning ? " ItsuKi asks him very coldly .
" hahahaha " Jams laugh "Eh " " you lose !" Amane wins against her cos she is laughing from his joke . " Fine you've won .. " She turns into other side angry . It is very silent moment no one talks. She can hear sound of waves . " The sea is very pretty " Jams says that calmly . Amane walked towards her and put big seashell near her left ear . "Eh, Amane san ? " " shuu..just listen ..." She closes her eyes and hears the sound of sea waves clearly come from the big seashell . " I'm happy .." she says that while she is opening her eyes " me too " he says that looking at her . They look at each other and together say " I'm happy to be here with you ------- " - puff- -- Ahahahaa!! both of them say and doing that in the end they are laughing .

The air is blowing and it's almost sunset " Well, sames both of you you have a great time !" Saeki says that to them . " very much puff " both of them reply . " humm , where is Bane san ?" Saeki is asking cos he don't see anyone stop their "dajari XD"
Bane san lays in the sand he looks very tired from them XD
" YO~ minna let's back ! " Aoi waves to them . Hani and Kauthar are waiting, too . They are walking together until they arrive at the station . " Well , we had a great time shall we go there again ? " Saeki asks that to Jams and Kau . " Sure ! as you wish but Next time tell me that my friends will coming so we can do more activities there " Jams says that " sure sorry for surprising you " Saeki is closing his eyes smiling " Thank you for everything " Kauthar thanks them . " uh ~ this is the 6th time " Saeki replays " uh .. I'm sorry >< " Kauthar blushed and closing her eyes . " take care Jams chan. " Amane says that with serious eyes . " uh? OK ..you too " Jams looks at his eyes surprising . There , they are separated .

At the bus , Hani sits at the window side and sleeps in kauthar's hand " ne ne Kauthar what did you do there ?" Jams is asking " umm I've drawn a picture " WHAT ?" In that place , too ? " she surprised " don't tell me you've drawn Shiraishii~?" Jams asks Kauthar with evil smile . " Eh .. Why his name is here too ? " Kauthar turned her face into red .." heheehehe .. Shiraishi Shiraishi " " Ah~ No please!! " . Finally , Jams takes her seat " I really felt happy " she says . " uh !! What did you do there? I've seen you collected shells and you laughed so much ! I hope you are really had entertainment there ." Kauthar says that . " indeed ! Next time tell me everything OK don't hide anything " " umm ? like what ? " " So you won't feel lonesome" Kauthar smiled at her " Thank you Jams " " Heh , no problem .. Wait it's the 7th times . What did you say to Saeki there 7th times " She wondered and Kauthar blushes and confused again . " No..Nothing >////<" " Kauthar you won't feel lonesome " " I'm here with you so how can I feel lonesome now >///<" " We'll know everything someday " Jams replays with challenge eyes . " eheheee.. sorry Jams" . They return safely at their home .


The End


It's my first long fanfiction .. I always wants to write story between me and Jams chan with Rukkaku teams . I'm very glad she is with me in bomb world .

Note : I won't force you to read and correct my mistakes >< but if you do I really appreciate


Hope you like it

Jams chan :
Kauthar :
Hani kun :


I didn't draw the Seashells : I used brushes from here > [link]

Β© Window of fantasy Bomb style character design Kauthar Sharbini.
Β© Hikaru "Davide" Amane , Harukaze "Bane" Kurobane , Marehiko Itsuki , Kojiro Saeki and Kentaro Aoi from anime Prince of tennis belong to Konami
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Comments: 46

Herowebcomics [2018-11-21 19:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Such a cute style!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Herowebcomics [2019-01-02 17:14:45 +0000 UTC]

OwO thank you so much !!

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lunarangel93 [2011-08-01 04:23:28 +0000 UTC]

^^ Sounds like a fun day at the beach
Everyone looks so innocent in the picture it's so cute

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sang555 [2011-07-10 23:10:33 +0000 UTC]

wow! your picture is so amazing :joy:

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sang555 [2011-07-10 23:10:31 +0000 UTC]

wow! your picture is so amazing :joy:

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CJ-DB [2011-06-26 22:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Great job and very pretty

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to CJ-DB [2011-06-27 16:16:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !!

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alvichi [2011-06-11 20:37:41 +0000 UTC]

awww another beach one XDD Love it!~

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to alvichi [2011-06-12 19:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Alvi

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alvichi In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-13 01:54:54 +0000 UTC]

your're very welcome

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Perimones [2011-06-10 19:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Aww, this is so pretty~
Great job writing such a long story! It looks like everyone had a lot of fun!
>u< β™₯

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Perimones [2011-06-12 19:19:15 +0000 UTC]

yeah they do Rokkaku team is crazy to have fun
Than you very much Ori chan
I'm glad i could write simple story now Thank you my friend

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MokonaTenshi [2011-06-10 14:43:57 +0000 UTC]

the story got longer XD but still so cute! <333 This drawing reminds me of the episode where they went to the beach and played volleyball 8D haha

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to MokonaTenshi [2011-06-12 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]

really ! eheheh this episode was funny .. after that they met Rokkakku team

Thank you very much Shishi . It's because of your advices and supporting from you ,that story become so long
I really Thank you

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ryocutema [2011-06-10 14:35:45 +0000 UTC]

hheeehhhh SUGOI this is the long story ever!
I want to participate but my holiday will end soon...

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to ryocutema [2011-06-10 19:53:09 +0000 UTC]

look at Kauthar side XD It's longer than this XD
bla bla bla I started talking too much

don't push your self so hard .. I didn't have a holiday yet ..and I worked at this art for 4 days every day 1 hour or 2 >< .. I just have fun
Just have fun Nur chan and you'll find your self finishing something

Thank you Nur chan

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ryocutema In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-11 12:30:09 +0000 UTC]

Yayyy I have read it
Its 2 or 3 times more longer

I went to my village this holiday, thats why I couldn't finish any of my arts.... lol because I went to beach

My school holiday will end soon and I'm getting busy again... well Sankyuu Kauthar~senpai!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to ryocutema [2011-06-11 19:34:22 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome Nur chan

luckky Nur chan
I'm very sure you had a great time
Did you meet Ryoma there

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ryocutema In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-12 09:27:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm not meet Ryoma~kun but I lost him!!
I lost my Ryoma~kun keychain...

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to ryocutema [2011-06-12 12:27:18 +0000 UTC]

What !!! Where did you lost it ?
In that beach ?

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ryocutema In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-19 15:37:52 +0000 UTC]

I don't know

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deidarakibaitachi [2011-06-10 12:49:43 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE BANE!!!!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to deidarakibaitachi [2011-06-10 19:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Bane is always funny ! watching him make me laugh without reason
Thank you Sherice

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deidarakibaitachi In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-11 01:52:58 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!!!!

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maipenrai-alata [2011-06-10 11:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Kawaii~

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to maipenrai-alata [2011-06-10 19:48:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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maipenrai-alata In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-11 00:36:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~

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Tacuma [2011-06-10 09:03:04 +0000 UTC]

So cute!!!!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Tacuma [2011-06-10 12:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Tacumaaaaaaa!
you were the first character who met POT characters in bombstyle

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Tacuma In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-10 12:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Waaaaa~ I was so lucky to be the first! And I met Tezuka and Fuji! Lucky me! Lucky everyone else now who gets to meet them too!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Tacuma [2011-06-10 16:18:59 +0000 UTC]

HOW Exciting !!!
What did happen professor Tacuma to Fuji and Tezuka ? did they land safety ?

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Tacuma In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-10 16:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Of course, Tezuka took care of everything, so we were all safe!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Tacuma [2011-06-10 18:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Good buchu !! I'm glad he is seigaku captain

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Tacuma In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-10 19:32:33 +0000 UTC]

He is the best!! He saved lives!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Tacuma [2011-06-10 19:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Amazing buchuuuu~

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AkiDemi [2011-06-10 03:34:15 +0000 UTC]

this is so cute that it hurts my eyes

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to AkiDemi [2011-06-10 06:46:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !!
aww our eyes hurt from the sun

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AkiDemi In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-10 06:52:11 +0000 UTC]

haha ahh!!!i'm blind~gotta turn ninja!

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to AkiDemi [2011-06-10 19:48:03 +0000 UTC]

yeay Ninja
XD why Ninja

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AkiDemi In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-11 02:10:40 +0000 UTC]

cos ninja's live in the dark!xD

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NekoRenoChan [2011-06-10 01:25:41 +0000 UTC]

KYAAAAAAAAA!!!!! It's so cute Kauthar-chan! I would love to go to the beach with you! And Missy Taichou says she wants one now. She wants to be put in with someone. She suggested me and her at the beach with Atobe and Mukahi. Maybe with us fighting over Atobe and Mukahi in the back feeling rejected.

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to NekoRenoChan [2011-06-10 07:12:34 +0000 UTC]

yeah , I always want to make story with you .
Do you remember when I write the word ( lonesome ) in the FB wall ? I was sure you would appear , from that event I thought about the beach story you are my inspiration

oh I really sorry that i didn't put Missy cos I didn't cover her character , and don't know about her too much She loves POT too ? wow great

Atobe and Mukahi humm I need to search first about Mukahi and how their friendships between each other .. woh Ore-sama team is the hardest one >< I'll think about it

Thank you Jams chan I really happy you like it !

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NekoRenoChan In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-10 13:42:19 +0000 UTC]

She happened to be here when this showed up in my Devwatch and she was like "I want one!" I'll have her pop on your FaceBook and you can get to know her better. She actually does not know Prince of Tennis very well, except what I have shown her, which is mostly Ore-sama and Mukahi (she is going to cosplay the Mukahi to my Ore-sama later this year) She actually really likes Bleach but I told her you have not seen it because it is very violent.

I'm happy I could be your inspiration Kauthar-chan. You've done so many pics for me at my request (I think five now?) and I feel I should make one for you. I'll think of something real good.

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luckynyan4 [2011-06-09 23:48:55 +0000 UTC]

awww,it was a lovely story and the cute art pice helped capture that summer feeling.
I think it would rally be a fun time spending the day on a beach playing games with the rokkaku, they are so friendly and energetic.
Itsuki with his puffs made me smile the most and his same old nande,Bane and Davide- I can almost picture them as they fight whenever a bad pun is uttered lol.
Have fun and hope you win the contest^^ I might join in just for fun haha,I wonder if I can draw you're character along with some others from my friends, will you let me?

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to luckynyan4 [2011-06-10 07:24:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm very exciting you are right 100% Rokkaku team is the rock !! their characters are so energetic !! the relationships are very friendly
Their action won't be forgotten I always want to be with them ><

I really thank you for reading my simple fanfic
yey !! it was really really fun please do it ! I wanna see your art more wish you a best luck !!
draw me with other characters !! :bluses: It's fine thank you thank you ! I wish to draw you ,too ( but I don't have you in bombstyle )
>

thank you thank you THANK you !!

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luckynyan4 In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2011-06-11 02:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww cute, I understand-anyone would rather be in that wonderful world then here haha
I like all of you're fics, you are talented.
I'm not going to write though, I’m a very lousy writer x) and thank you

Ah great, yeah-It will have around 8 or so characters ^^
Ahh..yeah, I gues I look mostly like one of my chars except I'm not a boy nor have that hair colour lol xD
I see, you’re story should stay in the past tense, since all the action has already taken place from last Monday until when you are retelling it..but present tense is always way better if you want to make the person "live" the story haha is rally up to you,

You can also combine them at times to highlight stuff but you have to know where..and I'm not that good with English orz*is shot*.

You're most welcome dear, I guess now I should get started on my own project lol.

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