HolySonata [2012-06-26 01:56:16 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps you could have focused more on the girl and maybe tossed a few leaves on her dress to give a more broken look.
Or perhaps have had it where she was fading.
Overall, it's very lovely. It works well with the quote you've chosen.
- ZumieDi
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