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Published: 2013-09-09 08:02:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 5665; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 9
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Description This is an adoption sheet commissioned by ~XiaoDarkCloud That means that they recieve first pick of any, or all of the adoptables! However, if you follow the rules below, you may be able to have any of the ones they don't pick.



1: All applicants MUST fill out an application. The application is more detailed than the previous one. You must comment describing the pony you want, and with this application. A star means that the information is optional.

NAME:
AGE:
GENDER:
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:
SHORT HISTORY:
LIKES:
DISLIKES:
*FAMILY:
*HOBBIES:
*FRIENDS:
*WHERE THEY LIVE:

2: These ponies are not a "first come first serve" Like my previous ones. These ponies will be handed out to the people who gave the clearest, most detailed, most well thought out applications. So it doesn't matter who gets there first. So fill out your application carefully for a better chance of winning the pony.

3: This sheet of adoptables will have applications open for one week. (7 days) then I will close the adoption, and review the applications. I'll pick the best app, and message the user that they were picked.

4: Once a user has been picked, they have three (3) days to write a short story, or draw a picture of the pony to "claim" it. If they fail to do so, I will pick the next best application, and repeat the process.

5: I will IGNORE any comments that just say "I want # 4 please." Fill. Out. The. Form. If you want a pony, you MUST fill out an application. Otherwise, you miss out.

6: NO BASES. I'm serious, guys. Bases/generators are fun and all, but I want to see you put some effort into these characters. I put effort into drawing them for you, and I expect you to return the favor.

7: 1 person, per pony, per sheet. No multible adopts for one page UNLESS they are the commissioner of the sheet.

1 ~XiaoDarkCloud
2 ~XiaoDarkCloud
3 ~XiaoDarkCloud
4 ~XiaoDarkCloud
5 ~XiaoDarkCloud
6 ~XiaoDarkCloud

(As a side note, I added sexual orientation to the list of information because I, as a christian, do not believe in or support a sexual relationship between anything other that one man and one woman. This is my belief, and I would ask that if you do not think this rule fair, please pass this adoptable sheet by. I am not trying to offend, but I would not feel comfortable giving someone a character I made if the character themselves are going to represent something I strongly oppose. Again, I mean no offence to anyone. I'm just trying to save people time if they mark their character as anything other than heterosexual, because the applcation will not be considered for adoption.
Thank you for reading, and I appreciate those who will follow the rules. Again, if you do not like this rule, I ask you to please pass this sheet by. Thank you. )
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Comments: 71

samuraivalerie [2018-03-20 18:39:02 +0000 UTC]

is this still going? i cant tell if any of these have been claimed or not

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Miyooooh [2015-12-03 01:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Name: Zinyard
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Sexual Orientation: Homosexual
Short History: A small mare known for her tendency to be bold around other mares unless she really likes them, She comes from a nice home but is prone to feeling sadness at random times, Is mostly sad on birthdays because she doesn't want to get older, She has a light purple and a regular brown back on it, She has a tail that stands up for her mutation, mixing her with a squirrel when canterlot dropped a dirty bomb on her home, not killing her but mutating her
Likes: Brunets, Kittens, Soda, Drawing, music, mares, and nerds (the ponies and the candy)
Dislikes: Mannequins, Angel Statues, and certain fat ponies (But not chubby ponies)
Family: (mother) Amie, (father) Noah, (step-dad) Nik, (step-mom) Jacqueline/ Noelle
Hobbies: Drawing, Writing books, Writing music, and playing piano randomly.
Friends: Mecha, Insanity Moon, RedBoy, RedGirl, and FlameLord
Where she lives: Old Hoof, Maneian, Equestria

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NanaSakuraChan [2015-12-02 04:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Isn't the top left one basically P-Body?

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BluthernSwirl [2015-10-06 22:26:57 +0000 UTC]

is this still open? if so:
name: Winter Gust
age: 15
gender: mare
sexual orientation: straight
short history: Winter Gust was born on the first winter during Luna's banishment. She is light blue with an even lighter blue mane and sea green eyes. when she first visited Canterlot, she became very attracted to the Crystal Heart and soon got a home nearby so she could see it every day. she got her cutie mark when a little filly got lost in a winter storm and she found it and brought it back to it's family.
likes: snow, classic music, ice cream
dislikes: pollen (she has allergies), rock music
hobbies: ice sculpting, singing
friends: various crystal ponies
i really hope i get her!!!
   

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Kayla-san In reply to BluthernSwirl [2015-10-09 17:24:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, these adoptables aren't open. ;u;

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BluthernSwirl In reply to Kayla-san [2015-10-09 20:13:19 +0000 UTC]

oh, that's okay

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ThatPerson4 [2015-07-13 17:18:46 +0000 UTC]

I made a custom and it is one from this guess whut one  

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Fossilclaws In reply to ThatPerson4 [2015-07-28 20:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Excuse you. You can't just take my pony's design, change it a little bit, and call it yours. I'm gonna have to ask you to please take down the image of the stolen design and change your icon before I have to take further action.

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ThatPerson4 In reply to Fossilclaws [2015-07-28 21:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Ok I deleted it ok!

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Fossilclaws In reply to ThatPerson4 [2015-07-28 23:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Alright, thank you. Please don't use adopts unless you're the one who bought them.

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ThatPerson4 In reply to Fossilclaws [2015-07-28 23:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Alright              




























































































 

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Fossilclaws In reply to ThatPerson4 [2015-07-29 00:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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candygirlmlp23 [2015-05-10 17:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Why can't I be this creative

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sorendash56 [2015-04-10 18:37:42 +0000 UTC]

when will u be doimg more of thise?.. cause there awsome and one of the only ways i can adopt with out points...

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Cygnuus [2014-08-05 02:07:25 +0000 UTC]

I wish i could get one, but i think it's closed?

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JucchiShepherd [2014-07-19 18:19:18 +0000 UTC]

The snake-like one Looks so cool! I really like her/him! >w<

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loganloco123 [2014-04-18 12:24:17 +0000 UTC]

A PORTAL PONY!!!! me love!!  

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Kayla-san In reply to loganloco123 [2014-04-20 22:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Ah, me love you love!

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Blooxi [2014-02-10 22:37:05 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely LOVE 1, 2, and 4! My favorites of this sheet.

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Kayla-san In reply to Blooxi [2014-02-11 00:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Haha, number 5 is my favorite on this one. Thanks!

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Blooxi In reply to Kayla-san [2014-02-11 00:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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AbyssalLime [2013-12-06 05:23:37 +0000 UTC]

6

NAME:friend
AGE:20
GENDER:male
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: straight
SHORT HISTORY: he want insane after having his wings ripped off and was tested on he sees the lost souls of the dead, his mind was taken over by a demon of the shadow's which show's him what there really like and made him believe that it's his only friend    
LIKES: cake, moonlight and books
DISLIKES: cheese
*FAMILY: all dead
*HOBBIES: like's to talk to the shadow's
*FRIENDS: the shadow monster
*WHERE THEY LIVE: he lives' in a abandon school

hope i'm not late

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Kayla-san In reply to AbyssalLime [2013-12-06 12:47:47 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, all these ponies are claimed. c:

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AbyssalLime In reply to Kayla-san [2013-12-06 13:05:51 +0000 UTC]

ok

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lilwyverngirl [2013-10-04 05:58:37 +0000 UTC]

I love the pose of the pegasus drinking the cola XD Really neat. And the Portal pony is really nicely done concept.

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Kayla-san In reply to lilwyverngirl [2013-12-06 13:02:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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lilwyverngirl In reply to Kayla-san [2013-12-12 06:31:31 +0000 UTC]

'Welcome!

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RedLotusPony [2013-09-26 17:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Guess I was to late. When will you upload the next one?

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Kayla-san In reply to RedLotusPony [2013-12-06 12:58:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure, when the next one's commissioned I suppose. XD

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Fossilclaws [2013-09-12 06:07:28 +0000 UTC]

Also, I already drew Deran. X3 Here ya go: xiaodarkcloud.deviantart.com/a…

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Fossilclaws [2013-09-12 03:59:45 +0000 UTC]

I know I didn't have to but I thought I'd write some short bios for these beautiful ponies and share them with u. c: Here they are:

1. P(ony) Body
Gender: None/presumably female
Species: Robotic Earth pony
Accessories: Portal gun
Let's just say that GLaDOS wanted to try something..err..NEW. This robotic pony helped to test whether animals(or artificial ones at least) could complete simple tests that were meant for humans.
Likes: Testing, Atlas
Dislikes: Difficult tests, Atlas
Family: I guess Atlas counts since they were both made by GLaDOS

2. Cardinal Moon/Dara(angel of rain and rivers)-still undecided
Gender: Female
Species: Earth pony
Accessories: Cancer crab choker, silver earrings
She is the embodiment of the Cancer Crab. She possesses all of the astrological traits of a typical Cancerian. Do to this, she can be moody and antisocial, but she's really a kind pony with a caring personality.
Likes: Personal space, being alone, nature, swimming, cool days
Dislikes: Hot days, overly-dramatic ponies, seeing her friends and family angry or hurt
Family: Aries, Taurus, Gem and Mini, Leo, etc.

3. Nic Flamel
Gender: Male
Species: Unicorn
Accessories: Alchemist's amulet, occasionally a belt strung with potions
He is a retired alchemist who has started making potions again due to his increased and updated knowledge of the art. He's succeeded in creating many artificial spells that Earth ponies and pegasi can use by means of ingesting a potion.
Likes: Complete silence, being alone, darkness(he works in the dark to better observe reactions between potion ingredients)
Dislikes: Being disturbed/having his work disrupted, loud ponies
Family: Cy(daughter that he hasn't seen in years because he hates children)

4. Fizzy Pop
Gender: Female
Species: Pegasus
Accessories: none
This pegasus is addicted to soda. I mean REALLY ADDICTED TO SODA. She can't go a day without drinking it. She's a young, hyper filly and she looks up to Pinkie Pie, often following her around to share jokes and buy her a soda from time to time.
Likes: SODA, being with others, playing and flying, telling jokes
Dislikes: Being alone, the dark, DIET SODA(she only likes the REAL stuff)
Family: unknown

5. Stygian Star
Gender: Female (but it is said that she can change her gender)
Species: Kirin
Accessories: none
This midnight-maned mare is a species called a Kirin, which is a mysterious relative of the unicorn. She can use very powerful magic that rivals that of the Princesses, but she wouldn't ever think of using her strength to bring harm to others.
Likes: Nature, open places(fields, forests, places where you can see the sky in general)
Dislikes: Being cramped by others(not to be confused with claustrophobia or anti-sociality), poachers/tree-cutters/others who hurt the environment
Family: unknown

6. Deran G. Ed (my personal favorite. :3)
Gender: Male
Species: Earth pony
Accessories: He wears his straight-jacket like its a fur coat
This stallion isn't one you'd want to be within a mile of. He has a generally unstable personality that causes him to have mood swings and violent outbursts. For some reason, mental hospitals can never keep him locked up for long, which is strange because he's only an Earth pony..
Likes: Mental hospitals strangely enough, his "lavely fur jackat"(I imagine him speaking in a British accent and a deep voice with a crazy tone to it~), being with(cough uncomfortablycloseto cough) other ponies
Dislikes: Needles(one tranq too many I suppose), the "big buuuly(burly) chaps in th' whoyte coats"
Family: He claims that he is Applejack, Applebloom, and Big Macintosh's mother.

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Kayla-san In reply to Fossilclaws [2013-09-21 23:12:31 +0000 UTC]

I like them all. QuQ -cuddles Deran- YOU BEST.

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Fossilclaws In reply to Kayla-san [2013-09-22 01:18:26 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Storm-Chaser21312 [2013-09-10 01:30:19 +0000 UTC]

I read a few comments below....

are these guys open or not?

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Kayla-san In reply to Storm-Chaser21312 [2013-09-10 07:54:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the commissioner claimed all the adoptables on this sheet. c:>

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Storm-Chaser21312 In reply to Kayla-san [2013-09-10 12:16:55 +0000 UTC]

I saw that i was just double checking c:

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Gingie-Snap [2013-09-09 21:24:59 +0000 UTC]

My try at #4

 

NAME: Fizzy Twist
AGE: 16
GENDER: Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY: Fizzy Twist is a lovable Pegasus who loves soda and sweets, but she can get a bit hyper sometimes. She sometimes works at the Cake's bakery as a soda jockey. As a young filly her mother always warned her about having too many sweets and soda; but it never effected her. Colgate would get annoyed with her now and then for not brushing enough.
LIKES: Soda, Candy, Sweets, Friends, Parties, Anything exciting.

 

I hope to possibly get her c:

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Kayla-san In reply to Gingie-Snap [2013-09-10 07:54:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the commissioner claimed all the adoptables on this sheet! Better luck next time!

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WarriorOfArt-1141 [2013-09-09 21:20:25 +0000 UTC]

#4

NAME:  Joyous Laughter
AGE:  18 (human age)
GENDER:  Female
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Straight
SHORT HISTORY:  Joyous was always bullied as a filly.  Everyone always found a way to laugh at her, tease her, or simply make her life miserable.  Day after day would she think about how she was the laughing stock of the kids in Canterlot, until one day she realized that the only reason they made fun of her was because they wanted something to laugh at....so she gave them one.  She adopted a fun loving attitude, developed an addiction for soda, and became the "class clown" type.  In the end, Joyous was finally happy and wasn't bullied any more. 
LIKES: Soda
DISLIKES: Being bullied
*FAMILY: moved away
*HOBBIES: Drinking soda
*FRIENDS: Soda
*WHERE THEY LIVE: In her pantry

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Kayla-san In reply to WarriorOfArt-1141 [2013-09-10 07:54:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the commissioner claimed all the adoptables on this sheet! Better luck next time!

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WarriorOfArt-1141 In reply to Kayla-san [2013-09-11 23:28:43 +0000 UTC]

awwww

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SherbertTCat [2013-09-09 21:00:39 +0000 UTC]

LOL @ 4.


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Kayla-san In reply to SherbertTCat [2013-09-21 23:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Nomnomnom @ 4

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SherbertTCat In reply to Kayla-san [2013-09-21 23:10:57 +0000 UTC]

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Goldenemerald2012 [2013-09-09 19:39:35 +0000 UTC]

#5

NAME: Violet Night

AGE: Ageless

GENDER: female

SEXUAL ORIENTATION: straight 

SHORT HISTORY: Violet Night used to be a harmless unicorn. After she excelled in animal magic forms she developed a spell, a spell used to become different animals. A form a shapeshifter. Violet perfected the magic over time. When she failed to find a person to test the magic out on she tried the spell on herself. It worked for a limited amount of time. Then Violet went insane. All the forms of magic she now used in everyday life overwhelmed her. The Nightmare Forces were 'summoned' by her aura. They easily consumed her. Now she helps in the forests at night, putting all to sleep.

FAMILY: nonexistent

HOBBIES: turning into various animals

WHERE THEY LIVE: on the outskirts of Canterlot 

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Kayla-san In reply to Goldenemerald2012 [2013-09-10 07:54:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the commissioner claimed all the adoptables on this sheet! Better luck next time!

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SherbertTCat In reply to Kayla-san [2013-09-11 19:11:11 +0000 UTC]

The commissioner claimed all of them?

Wow, James Gordon loves him some ponies!

No one must know my terrible secret.


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toywitch [2013-09-09 17:07:48 +0000 UTC]

My try-out for #3 ^^


NAME: Solar Shield
AGE: 37 (if we're going by the same age rate as a human)
GENDER: Male
SEXUAL ORIENTATION: Heterosexual
SHORT HISTORY: He was the only child to his parents, and even at a young age he had a strong desire to serve his princesses, and when he became of age he joined the royal guard. Working his way through the ranks, he had the chance to be one of Princess Celestia's personal guards. He had always been very skilled in his defensive magic, but when he began to see Celestia practice her magic, he truly began to have a deep, burning passion for it. Giving up his duty as a royal guard, he instead became a student to one of Canterlots potion masters, wanting to learn more about the scientific approach to magic. Even as a colt he had enjoyed experimenting, which was how he obtained his cutie mark when a experiment gone wrong turned out to be a new take on a potion that could be used to briefly pause a moment in time. When he began his lessons further into potion work, he excelled. Once confident enough that he could be without his teacher, he set up his own shop in Canterlot for magical items and ingredients, and even began to offer lessons to those who wanted to learn how to practice magic in a more scientific manor.
LIKES: Strawberries, raspberries, vanilla, croquet, dinner parties, music, autumn.
DISLIKES: Snow, disobedience, defiance, childish behavior, unruly behavior, butterscotch.
*FAMILY: His parents decided to move to Baltimare in their old age, so Solar doesn't often get the chance to visit them due to his work but always tries to be with them for major holidays and events. He doesn't have a "very special somepony", granted he has tried over the years but nothing seems to work out in the end, so he mostly dedicates himself to his profession.
*HOBBIES: Star gazing, creating new potions or new versions of already existing potions, teaching his students, reading adventure novels, attending high-class events such as royal parties, and playing croquet. 
*FRIENDS: Solar keeps to himself for the most part, but he does have a few ponies who he likes to keep in touch with. Usually he spends the most time with his students, although once they move on he tends to let them be on their own, unless they come back to him for anything.
*WHERE THEY LIVE: Canterlot

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Kayla-san In reply to toywitch [2013-09-10 07:55:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, the commissioner claimed all the adoptables on this sheet! Better luck next time! But might I say your bio is wonderful. @A@ I loved the whole story. I'm sorry you didn't get him! XD

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toywitch In reply to Kayla-san [2013-09-10 15:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Ah, tough luck on my part haha ^^ Maybe next time

Thank you so much! All of these were really well designed, I'll have to keep an eye out for more in the future ^^

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