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Published: 2013-09-11 13:33:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 2139; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Now I'm not going to tell you what's happening, that is what you must figure out yourself. So Phases of change fans, what could be happening in this spoiler?The story for the people that haven't read.
FanFiction: www.fanfiction.net/s/9221699/1β¦
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Is that with a sceptile cross gene or grovels due to his arms and the thing on his head looks like a mawlile
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Mmm that's Echo from my story~ X3
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K so he's a Gromyko but why isn't a sceptile much stronger and can mega evolve?
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K but damn what is he
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omg coal is dead
(i dont know why but i feel like people forget the fact that charmander and its evolutions die when its flame goes out and instead they think that he is just weakened. but thats just me)
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No no I do know that too X3 I do feel like a lot of people know that, it might just be newer people ^^
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ok then its just me but also that means i can do this
OOO NUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! COAL IS FUDGING DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I'm so sorry ^^ I didn't know you liked Coal so much.
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NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
(i could care less because he isnt my favorite character but still nuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!)
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WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Well he's not dead yet XD
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then tell which is itΒ
first u say that im right that he is dead and know he is just barley alive
which one is it!!!
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I Believe this will be a final battle almost at the end of the fanfic. I think.
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I haven't gotten to this part yep!!! Β I have no Ida what's going on but, NOOOO COAL!!!! Β SORA, REMEMBER HOW STRONG HE IS!!!Β
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No one has XD I haven't written the story that far yet.
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Ya, I just finished the part you have done... I NEED MORE!!!! I can't live without it!Β
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Sorry ^^ It'll take time.
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Noo way.. It will take time!?Β Β
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I know right, can't believe it either XD
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I'm suddenly reminded of another fanfiction I read. It was rated M, and the particular event I'm reminded of was called, and I quote, "Doomsday". (half of the pokemon and one of the trainers in the main group died in a madman's ownΒ elaberatly setup bloodbath, but both of his actual targets escaped with their lives... though one of the 2 is destined to die soon, saving the other. The main mainΒ character is a human girl reborn as an Eevee after she commited suicide but tried to save herself after it was too late. Very sad but has a bittersweet ending along with a sequel starting were the first left of. They defeated a madman, but can they beat an entity with more power than even Arceus, Mew, & Giratina along with her cult of worshipers while challenging the Johto leauge and looking for Angela's (the main main character, who is-oh,Β almostΒ spoiled something!)Β lost sister? Part 1: A Little Night Music, 130 chapters. Part 2: Smiles of a Summer Night, 89 chapters and counting.)
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0.o Whoa, that sounds interesting ^^ And scary.
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Oh, and Angela is reborned as the Eevee that the person she is in love with planned to use as his starter when it hatched. He also loves her back but never told her, and ironically nicknames her Angel. Sad that he thinks she is dead, but a little funny in an ironic way with the nickname he gave her. There is a good chance someone from part one just as powerful as the one trying to kill the remaining and new members of the group, but have rules (in fact, those two are both, as Angel calls them, 'Not Pokemon', but the real term, said by one of the two during a chat they have, is Titans) and the one who was helping them follows those rules, while the one attacking them (even helping that madman hunt down and kill the group) does not follow those rules. A hint to the evil one's pokemon species is that they are said to be the most beautiful pokemon in the world.
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i cant stop staring at this picture its so good and intense:3
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yay cant wait, nice drawing by the way
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amazing thought - what if this was made into a video game?! my god that would be amazing
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I only have access to RPG Maker VX Ace >W<
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I only have access to 2k and 2k3. 2k3 would seem like the funner option out of them, but all that spriting would drive me crazy.
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If its as simple as it looks then that wouldn't be too hard to do
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Oh god you're right this is hard
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So I am going to use extreme analyzing skillz here - Obviously Echo is there, making him a vital character in the plot rather than just another obstacle; Coal is there, so it can't be in his mind; Sora is fully transformed, making this possibly chapter 25+ areas; In some sort of building, perhaps Horizon base? sugjesting (god I can normally spell that) that they went there to get revenge, or to find a cure; sora does not have other pokemon with him, meaning that tom took care of them after he was unable to handle them due to becoming an umbreon possibly; Echo's tshirt is part of his arm; green line on the ground suggests a science lab, as they use those as ways to tell directions in large science complexes. I think I'm done. oh yeah explosion maybe tom got in some serious trouble back there? did I do good? probably not. ALL THE ANALYZING
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0.o A lot of text. Parts of that may or may not be right
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Tell me in a pm if u don't wanna give away public spoilers
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Oops scratch that I wrote this b4 page refresh
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So how long is school going to last until you can write freely? You're such a good writer with such an interesting story that I just finished it for the third time
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ah I see im like that when I write too
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I'm slowly working on the next chapter though
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