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KBeth — Emmy... a sad short story...
Published: 2012-03-20 21:39:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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“Mommy, why don’t they look at me?”

“What do you mean, dearest?” a young woman replied absentmindedly as she pulled a box of cereal off of the shelf. Quickly she scanned the ingredients and placed it in the cart.

“They look in my direction, but they never see me. That man over there- he just walked right through me. I felt him, saw him… But Mommy, that man didn’t see me.”

“Nonsense, dearest. They just ignore you because you are a little child,” the slender brunette said looking down. Her voice was slightly strained. It always concerned her when Emmy spoke like that.

“No, Mommy. You’re not listening! They don’t see me!”

“Please, Emmy, don’t raise your voice.”

“But you’re not listening!”

“Emmy-“

A tall, dark-haired woman glanced at the young mother with a concerned expression on her face. Anne smiled apologetically. “Six year old children- right?” The woman’s eyes widened and she quickly turned the cart around and walked away.

“Mommy?”

“Yes, Emmy?”

“Why did that woman give you that look?”

“I really don’t know, dearest. Perhaps she doesn’t approve of my parenting skills,” Anne replied walking forward. “I think we’re ready to check out, okay?”

“Okay, Mommy…” the voice came back quietly.

Anne looked behind her. Emmy was nowhere in sight. “Emmy? Where did you go? She quickly walked around the corner. No sign of the child. Emmy? Emmy!” All of a sudden Anne went into full panic. She left the cart where it was and hurried down the isles. “Emmy! Where are you?” People stopped and stared at the brunette as she hurried about, looking for her daughter. Finally Anne went to customer service. “Please, you’ve got to help me. I can’t find my daughter! She was with me just a moment ago-“

“Please, calm down ma’am. What is your daughter’s name?”

“Emmy. Emmy Walters.”

“What does she look like?” the woman at the desk asked in an almost bored tone.

Anne’s panic mounted with each passing moment. “She’s six years old. Here hair’s a light reddish-brown… She-she’s wearing a-a purple dress.”

“Calm down, she couldn’t have gotten far. I’ll help you look for her.”

“Anne!” A tall man with jet-black hair hurried up to them. “Anne, dearest- I’ve been worried sick. Where have you been? I’ve been looking for you for two whole days!”

Anne looked up at the man, worry still plain on her face. “Oh, John, is Emmy with you?”

The man’s face instantly turned grave. “Anne, Anne, dearest…” He hugged her close. “Emmy’s dead.”

 Anne’s eyes widened as she pulled away. “No, she’s not! Emmy was just right here with me…only a moment ago!”

Sadness filled John’s face as he looked at his little wife. “Anne, when will you see? It’s been two years, now…”

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Comments: 5

InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-22 00:53:24 +0000 UTC]

OH. MY. WORD.
I cannot express with words how amazing this is.
I'm guessing it's about the girl's memory of her child? That's beyond depressing, but it's amazing.

` Mikki

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KBeth In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-22 12:37:03 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks Mikki!!!!
Yes, basically the young woman's child had died, but she never could let go. She continued to live her life as if the little girl were there, she was lost in her imagination. People thought she was crazy. She just didn't know how to say goodbye.

I love a lot of your work. Do you write stories or just poetry?

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to KBeth [2012-03-22 23:56:18 +0000 UTC]

This could easily become a best selling novel... Seriously...

I'm working on a few novels. I love words... poetry is mainly what I write, but I have an insane imagination... and novels are the only way I can put my imagination to the test... Even though I can never stay dedicated long enough to write one completely.

~ Mikki

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KBeth In reply to InconsequentialPoet [2012-03-23 01:04:55 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, that's funny. I'm writing it into a novel.
I write novels, myself, but my brain jumps between them and then I move on to another before one nears completion.
So many ideas, so little time. lol

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InconsequentialPoet In reply to KBeth [2012-03-23 18:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, same with me. I'm working on five different ones. They're all quite detailed too, so when I switch to another novel and then go back to the one I WAS writing, I forget where I am and what the reader knows, so I have to read the entire thing before I can move on. So it's extremely time consuming. O.o

~ Mikki

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