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keb-s — Steampunk Crayon - Revisited
Published: 2011-08-11 21:35:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1114; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 15
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Practice session for both anatomy and lighting and an attempt to kick my own butt.Here's the old one : [link]
Not sure if i succeeded XD
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Thank you so much bro!
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Neat!
I like the girl's pose, clothing and the seriousness of her expression.
The "emoticon" faces of the floating robots is the loveliest! :>
You've certainly improved in comparison to the old version, since the buildings look a step more 3-dimensional and the woman's facial features are a lot more accurate
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Thanks! I'll definitely have more of those robots in the future
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You're welcome! Looking forward to that then :3
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Thank you! 
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I'd say you definitely did. If you don't mind me making a small critique, I'd like to say everything would look all the better if the source of light was a tad less intense. Though it does make sense for it to be that way (and the faded glow effect you're going for is quite nice), the lighting effecting the characters in the foreground doesn't seem to be as strong compared to the buildings in the background. Places such as the face of the building that's away from the source of light would do well if they were some shades darker, in my opinion.
The buildings are much crisper, though, and there is an unmistakable improvement in the character's anatomy and overall design. Particularly the woman's apparel! It's quite stylish.
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Wow! Thank you for pointing these things out! Yeah, this is exactly what I needed - a honest criticism.
What you said about the lighting and the shades is true as well. I will definitely revisit this art again and remember what you said. Thank you for the complement on the apparel
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No problem! It's good when there's evident improvement.
Doing an old picture over must be fun.
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swett^^ love the litle robots, only thing is, since there'S only blue on them it seems like the character isn't the main poitn. it'S ok if that'S what you ntendd but if you wanted the girl to stand out it's really not the case.
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Thank you for that! It's really nice to know things that I don't realize myself (immediately, at least). Now that I look at it, what you said really does make a lot of sense
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