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Kebikun — Girl Sketch numero uno
Published: 2007-06-13 05:29:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 5000; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 118
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Yea, well, I'm tryin' to draw every day. One of these per week; that's the goal.Edit: Kergs told me to get rid of those cut off lines. We fought. He won. The lines are gone.
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We have the same goal. So far, I start over every time.
Good lines. I rarely clean anything up to this level.
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awesome! i look forward to seeing more of your work 
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Of course I dig the idea if I can manage to draw something worthy of your colors. But seriously, if I post something you like, let me know and I'll hook you up with a larger, cleaner file. How're things going with you, by the way?
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things are going okay,i'm overwhelmed with school though. and incapable of organizing myself..
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Hoorah! You posted one of em'!
Bout time you had an update.
You know I dig the drawing and her spiffy outfit and accessories. Love those badass details!
Advanced Critique eh...
Not much I can say. She's look more natural if her hanging arm weren't so straight, maybe doing something a little more casual and comfy... hand/thumb in pocket, maybe? Hand on hip? Rubbing her sweet, sweet femme-butt, fantasizing that it's Kebikun?
Besides that arm... um, well presentation is kinda important. Really important for portfolio pieces. Not sure adding that bottom line to the legs really helps the drawing out. Personally, I'd rather see the line's just kind of end, indicating that you just didn't want to go further with it, or cut the bottom of the legs off at the end of the page.
Well, that's my take. Anyway, awesome job!
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Yea, I struggled with the arm and hand. It personally doesn't bother me much, but I'm sure it will later down the line. As for the cut off lines, I'll try it without em'. I suppose she does look sort of like an amputee now that I look at it.
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Kevin, these are LOAD BEARING WALLS! They're not gonna come down!
...It's pronounced thermometer.
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As usual it looks good. Nice modeling on the accessories in particular. The back hand looks a bit akward facing out like it is, but it does give a sort of body language of "What?" as if you were starring at her.
Hope to see more soon man.
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Yea, I struggled to get a hand that I was comfortable with and that didn't look too weird. I probably jumped into details too early in the game again which may explain the awkwardness. Oh well, time to move on.
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hey thats a good sketch.
i try to draw some girl face but they always look masculin im still practiting. but i can draw girl only if i look one but i cant draw from my imagination i think i need more practice.
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Yea, we all need more practice. The key to drawing girls, I suppose, is to stay away from sharp angles. Compared to guys, I like to draw girls' eyes larger, their lips fuller, their noses smaller and less distinct, and their faces rounder. Actually, I just stay away from too many details in general, which is why I tend to think guys are easier to draw. Good luck.
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thanks for the help and yeah by the wat have you made some comic book?
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hey, wow! thats a really nice sketch! i love the eyes
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oh my gosh thats cool. i like the colors, even though its just a sketch.
the details are supero dupero coolo.
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Yes! One a week! Stop talking, sir, start drawing! Draaaaawwww, puppet! Draaaaaw!
Hot stuff man, really like those fingers.
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I'm promising this time around.
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Maybe if I drew for 22 hours each day; I draw real, real slow.
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Dude... when I see you finish up a drawing like this, it blows me away, honest, you get such fine details.
Kevin help me, my anatomy sucks again!...
and don't say "I told you so."
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Thanks, man. All I have to do is put my mind to it, really.
I think your anatomy is fine, dude. It totally fits with your style.
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It just bugs me when I feel I'm not placing muscles in the right places, I need to practice more.
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Well, that's just it. All any of us can do to improve is practice; there's no shortcut. What I do, personally, is steal your pose books and just draw poses straight out of the book for practice while using a normal anatomy book (the ones that label the different parts) to cross reference stuff. It's only occasionally successful and I tend to retain very little, but it's better than nothing. Give it a try once I return your stuff.
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