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Kechake — Come Home Jane

Published: 2008-05-12 15:13:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 990; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 34
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Description Come home Jane Come home Jane Come home Jane

An echo, silently calling in the veiled meadows

I brought you a letter but the birds ate it Ate it Ate it

Pieces of paper torn into rye

Storm is filling the sky with its fury Fury Fury

The only sound – the anxious whisper of storm

My only wish Only Wish Only Wish

Hope as a symbol for lovers and fools

Come home Jane don't get wet in the rain.

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Happy Mothers' Day.

How to read this poem: it consists of two completely different parts, you read it like abab. Written for the ones who... care. Our mothers care about us. They don't want us to get wet in the rain.

What I want to say – even if you're not very close with your mother (like me), spend at least this special day with them, because who knows, it may always be the last one in your life.

.Think of me.

~Black-Ofelia-Stock / *freaky665 / ~Lady-Dementia-Stock / +bird brushes

I stay simple.
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Comments: 8

LiiviK [2008-08-27 20:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Kohutavalt ilus on.

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Frank-Beer [2008-06-11 19:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Very good work.

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StigmaChina [2008-05-19 09:00:37 +0000 UTC]

wonderful work!

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nahna [2008-05-12 21:45:47 +0000 UTC]

yeap
nice and simple

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KingofdreaMers [2008-05-12 17:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Nice work !

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Scorp55 [2008-05-12 15:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Sa oled õel! Ma olen alati leidnud mingi detaili mida kritiseerida, aga seekord pole küll mitte midagi mida ette laita! No sa ju ikka pidid veatu töö siia toppima!

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Kechake In reply to Scorp55 [2008-05-12 15:49:20 +0000 UTC]

Awwww. Ze thanks.
Mul on hea meel, kui sa nii arvad. ^__^

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Iardacil [2008-05-12 15:17:27 +0000 UTC]

ilus pilt.. Ja see nimi meenutab mulle väga üht teist laulu

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