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KeepersofthePeace — Chapter 3, pg 15

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Description Decided that flashbacks are going to be greyscale with a slight twinge of color. A webcomic I was reading had a similarly colored page (but only because they didn't have time to do it full color XD) and I thought it looked kinda cool.

The forefighters are largely humans and elves: goblins are highly restricted in their rights (Goblin War and all... more on that later) and aren't really allowed to join, the orcs are insanely loyal to their own tribes/kind and consider it their highest calling to serve their leader (more on that later), the centaurs find it extremely hard (but not impossible) to complete the tests required to be a forefighter, the ixaq tend to prefer to stay in their birthplace, the dragons think too highly of themselves to mingle with other kinds like this, the naiads are few and far between and stick to water in the first place, the miren live short lives (30 years) so it seems like there are fewer forefighters from their kind (although they make excellent fighters and acrobats), aratians that fight well are drafted into the Svinn-Gaar (more on that later), and as far as the essence go, Unknown is the only one known to exist (again, more on that later). And yes, the forefighters are mercenaries and have a secret hideout. More on that later.

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Riverfox237 [2011-01-19 04:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Agh! So many details that are being saved for later! But I like the fact that you named all the races, at least in the Alliance, here. There are so many of them,which is not a critisism; it's tricky get this many different races living in one world, I would think, and you're doing an admirable job so far as I can see.

Could this hidden person possibly be the person Willowtail was fighting with in the prologue and supposedly killed? I have my suspicions. (And I so enjoy stories with plot twists like this that I am constantly on the lookout for them. XD Which can really kill the surprise on the occasion that I'm right.)

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Yubria In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-02-12 02:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Feel free to keep me updated on your suspicions/theories/etc. I'm always curious as to what my readers are thinking and whether they're thinking what I want them to think so plot twists will actually be twists. XD

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