Riverfox237 [2011-01-19 04:18:38 +0000 UTC]
Agh! So many details that are being saved for later! But I like the fact that you named all the races, at least in the Alliance, here. There are so many of them,which is not a critisism; it's tricky get this many different races living in one world, I would think, and you're doing an admirable job so far as I can see.
Could this hidden person possibly be the person Willowtail was fighting with in the prologue and supposedly killed? I have my suspicions. (And I so enjoy stories with plot twists like this that I am constantly on the lookout for them. XD Which can really kill the surprise on the occasion that I'm right.)
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Yubria In reply to Riverfox237 [2011-02-12 02:11:38 +0000 UTC]
Feel free to keep me updated on your suspicions/theories/etc. I'm always curious as to what my readers are thinking and whether they're thinking what I want them to think so plot twists will actually be twists. XD
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