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Published: 2011-03-24 20:51:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 739; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Told you Nic would get him back. XD But to give credit where credit is due, that whole hitting-people-with-the-flute thing came from a band leader at a school I was at. He was trying to get guys to try it out, and said something similar to what Nic said, sans the whacking. XD When I heard him say that, I knew I had to use it somewhere.Had enough of scripting and decided to work on another page. Just an FYI- I figured while I'm changing the comic name, I might as well make any other changes right now. So if there's any difference in character designs, the way I'm doing stuff, etc. that's why. Although I think the biggest character change was Lucrecio getting a haircut, different scar, and no eyepatch (he keeps losing it, he says, so he doesn't even bother with it anymore). So nothing big. Mostly just stuff I've never been exactly happy with. I think I've finally figured out what I want to do about motion lines, and I think I'll end up inking backgrounds again, depending on how it looks on the next page. Anyways. Any other suggestions as far as changes go are welcome.
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XD Flute Attack! Lol, he totally deserved that. I love how Ori can't remember where his perfect hiding space was. And I see that you're trying to slip in some subtle fanservice by showing a shirtless centaur in that there last panel.
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Of course- that's how good a spot it was! (very good, actually, considering Rhinnia wasn't able to find it... I mean, she IS their mom....) Lol, well, actually, the shirtless centaur is there for a slight shift in scene. And because he can only stand wearing that sort of clothing for so long. Aaaaaand I get tired of drawing said clothing now and then.... XD
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Pfff. XD Yay, I can't wait to see what comes with the next scene!
The one thing that's a little awkward with centaurs is...well, just how much clothing do they have to have on to not be considered 'naked'? The women are pretty obvious, but the guys...? 
(Obviously I am picky about these things. A perfect example is that when I entered a KH rpg where you played as yourself, and I started in the Narnia world as a faun, my persona wore a sort of makeshift skirt.
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Let me tell you, it's a fun one. Hard to draw, but fun. XD
IKR. And then I guess some people figure that if the guy centaurs don't need to wear anything, then why should the girls? So I tried to keep that in mind and keep them as fully clothed as possible at all times... although it doesn't really help if my own character decides he doesn't like my wardrobe choices. He'd much rather be wearing fur and leather right now, but that's not exactly appropriate for such high-class dealings atm.
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Aaaagh...I am SO GLAD I have yet to see a naked female centaur. >.< You can at least ignore inconsistencies with the guys (although, lol, I still feel a little awkward seeing Iavar without his shirt on for some reason!), but come ON, people!
I love disgruntled characters and centaurs, so Iavar is definitely one of my favorite characters of your comic.
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WOOT! "actions speak louder than playing your manly flute. 
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